Pessimist

Pessimist

A Poem by Pritesh
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Here is the narration of a man just deprieved of every hope and love of this nasty world....I HOPE YOU'LL LIKE IT.

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The endless, barren life is vain.
Shorn off hope and all disdain.

Only can I hear the solitary voice:
"No reason with you to rejoice!".

My luck pretends never to shine.
"Where will lead the destiny mine!".

The incredulous world to my thought ever,
enlisted my mind in the eccentric fewer.

In the world renounced none to criticize.
Even the upcoming hell not to me a surprise.

The brief statement I only insist:
"No sight is worse than pessimist".

© 2013 Pritesh


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Hi Pritesh,
Short poems should never be apologised for. It is more difficult to capture emotion and vision in them. You have done a great job here in a lovely poem with good meter and metaphor. You are young you will get over such set backs enjoy life and don't be a victim be a vixen!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pritesh

7 Years Ago

thanks!
Jasmine Thurber

7 Years Ago

Good poem.I think you did great, I bet you will do a lot better on the next poem you make.hope you h.. read more
Pritesh

7 Years Ago

thanks!



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this good poem pritesh it is state of mind which showes in poem


Posted 4 Years Ago


A pessimist is certainly negativity personified…
but the worst??? well, maybe. Certainly to you .. at this time….
You are right however Pritesh… a man who continually gives off bad vibes, loses all hope, and pontificates all that is wrong with the world and his station in it…is not a cat you want to hang out with. No one likes a constant complainer…but we all get in that mood from time to time.
You did a great job expressing that feeling…and your cadence and rhyme scheme were spot on.
I enjoyed the read.
good job Pritesh
allen

Posted 5 Years Ago


this is good, I like it so.nice write,
-rain

Posted 5 Years Ago


You nail it on the head with your words. i like the way you convey your intent.

Posted 6 Years Ago


There's been times I felt that way. Great write Pritesh.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pritesh

6 Years Ago

thanks
Sometimes its hard in life to be an optimist when so many things around you seem to fall apart and there seems to be no hope you have capture this emotion well here. Nicely written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pritesh

6 Years Ago

thanks for the kind review
Carolann Dowsett

6 Years Ago

Welcome :)
Disillusionment happens. You have written a great poem out of it. I liked it a lot.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pritesh

6 Years Ago

thanks for ur kind review
Awesome rhythm and the last two lines really brings us down into a soft landing. Great write!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pritesh

6 Years Ago

thanks for the kind review...
Inda

6 Years Ago

no prob!
"The luck pretends never to shine,
where will lead the destiny mine.''

i love these lines, they are full of it!, i don't know what 'it' is but i can feel it
sorry if i don't make any sence at all XD
great poem, with great emotions, keep up!


Posted 6 Years Ago


Pritesh

6 Years Ago

thanks for the kind review! And for 'it' haha...:-D
Salar Majak

6 Years Ago

:D you are welcome
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Its A Very "Dark" Poem That Has A Lot Of Meaning And Depth To It, And Even Though Its Short, It Flows Really Well. The Way You Expressed Emotion Using Few Words Is Quite Amazing, As Well.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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I am of the common species of teenagers that rarely has a single trait uncommon, but the only thing that I hold distinct is perception.I deem, to have a unique perspective is to personify one's charac.. more..

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