Wisps of Love.

Running behind love, into a wounded alley...

I walked through those streets
where we clasped hands and smiled
and my eyes memorized yours
on that cool, winter morn.
I traced our steps on the sand
when I blushed at your tender touch
two pairs of besotted eyes
gleaming in the hazy creme dawn.
I stood watching the sky
reminiscing that love-lit view
when we shared our new sunshine
when I belonged with you.
Now here I lay demented
the wind blowing me away
smirking my ignorance
a thunderstorm inside.
I look at my bare hands
missing yours that fit in mine
feel my lips go slack
withered without your touch.
I wince at your very thought
Haunting silhouettes choke me
for you've heard my heart crack
yet left my soul lone and scared
I wonder if you remember..
or if you glaze over our little world
for my respect hasn't strayed
I wish for yesterday once more.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Most of us wish for people and things when we can't find them anymore. I like the way you described your desire to find a better place.
"I look at my bare hands
missing yours that fit in mine
feel my lips go slack
withered without your touch."
Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

[CA Geetha]

Yesterday once more..... Lovely

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Wow..!!! This is a great piece of work..!!!!

[Sujash I. Purna]

good work here Priyanka! Well-done!

Haunting silhouettes choke me
for you've heard my heart crack

relates so much to me

[Dushyant Thadani]

I am in the same condition... This feeling is very hard to get through... But all in all, its an amazing poem...

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I stood watching the sky missing your hand that fit in mine. My respect for you hasn't strayed as I remember how our eyes gleamed in the hazy dawn. I look at my bare hands and wish for yesterday once more. Beautiful!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very cool. I like this.

[Kathryn]

You showed deeo sorrow through this, and I really liked it :) great work :)

[Ripple of Aqua]

A little all over the place, scenery wise, in the beginning. But overall this was great.