Only With You

Only With You

A Poem by Priyanshi

 

You are my secluded home.

My love for you and up to you.

My frustration for you and from you.

My secrets gathered up in the wardrobe of yours.

My love in the bed with you and only for you.

An opus of love, I find blooming in the air.

Twinge of emotions in the arms of yours,

Leaving the night pillow dry.

Rapture moments  with you on the couch,

Along an infinite of chortle with you.

My journey of life on the highway

All the time, only with you…

Only with you.

© 2017 Priyanshi


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A beautiful, engaging and emotional adventure of love with your loved one...
Well done, keep it up :))

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Hey, thank you so much, Mr. Writer, for the kind review and visit..
Mr.Writer

6 Years Ago

No problem :))
Romantic and lovely one. i like it .

Thanks for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, friend, for the lovely review.
There are moments where we do feel whatever we want to do is only with them, that fact is nicely expressed in this poem. I liked it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you, so much, dear...m glad for your kind review and visit.
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're most welcome.
Well done love poem! I like that this has an original sound & you don't paint everything as being perfect (no love situation is). You've chosen interesting specifics to show how this relationship works well in all the everyday relatable ways.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

I'm really glad to read your review, maam...thank you so much for the visit.
soo beautifully it has been written...keep it up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, dear,for the review.
Beautiful "opus of love". Eloquent, tender words and metaphor use. "Rapture moments with you"-passionate and lovely. Wonderful poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Maam..I'm glad that you loved it.

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