Shine

Maybe you should leave for a while

Give yourself some space

The time away will give you strength

To get to a happier place

Nothing lasts forever

And eventually everything must end

This conclusion is just the beginning

Your heart just needs to mend

So pick yourself up and just go

Do not stop

Walk till your feet are bleeding

And your body just drops

Because you will get over it

And a better life you will live

There will be no more melancholy

Only love and joy you will give

To yourself and

Around you, to everyone

You will glow, you will shine

You will shine better than the sun

Reviews

[Solitary Traveler]

I enjoyed this piece. It doesn't start with the darkness you were walking away from, but after it. I think that is why I liked it. The cause was over. Now, it is time to just do it. To Shine. Thanks for sharing.

[ProCoacoa]

Thanks a lot! It's nice to see it from someone else's perspective :)

[sonnie ibadah]

very inspiring poem, good work!

[ProCoacoa]

Thank you, sonnie :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is truly a wonderful piece of writing sometimes we have to get away from a situation to find our way back to where we belong:)

[ProCoacoa]

That is exactly what I wanted to express through this poem. Thanks Vidya! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome fellow scribbler lol:)