About me

About me

A Poem by ProCoacoa
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Sometimes we need to give ourselves some importance in order to move forward.

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No, it isn't all about you
This time, it won't be
Its right to leave you behind
Now, Im focusing on me
I am moving slowly
One step and a breath
The healing has begun
I will be reborn, this isn't my death
I am moving faster now
My strength just seems to grow
That glimmer of light 
Now is a ray of hope
I can almost touch it
Happiness is just a step away
It can only get better now
With each passing day
 

© 2013 ProCoacoa


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ProCoacoa
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This says what everyone feels when they've given too much and not gotten enough back, or gotten nothing back, from a partner. They stop thinking of nothing but their partner and start to think of themselves, and realize that it isn't a bad thing. It isn't selfish. Eventually, if you keep draining the pond, it will be empty and there will be nothing left to give. Nicely done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ProCoacoa

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much. That meant a lot to me.



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This is inspiring, full of optimism and strength. It's time to regain strength and move on, focus on yourself.
Glad you can...how I wish I can, too.
Best wishes!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ProCoacoa

6 Years Ago

Thanks Light! It just feels that way for a while, but trust me, you will come out of it in due time... read more
wow! i like the strength in this one. we all have that time in our lives when we just reflect our past, brush it away and say, "i'm doing me now."

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ProCoacoa

6 Years Ago

Yes, thats very true. Thanks Sonnie :)
This says what everyone feels when they've given too much and not gotten enough back, or gotten nothing back, from a partner. They stop thinking of nothing but their partner and start to think of themselves, and realize that it isn't a bad thing. It isn't selfish. Eventually, if you keep draining the pond, it will be empty and there will be nothing left to give. Nicely done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ProCoacoa

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much. That meant a lot to me.
Sometimes you need to focus on yourself.Too often we give ourselves over to others ,being sure to tend to them but we need to exist for ourselves too.Nicely written:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ProCoacoa

6 Years Ago

Thank you Vidya :)
Vidya Bacchus

6 Years Ago

You are welcome:)
The sense of self affirmation is what I like most about this piece. Homerun I'd say! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ProCoacoa

6 Years Ago

Thanks Raymond :)
Raymond Federle

6 Years Ago

Had to come back for a second look... needed some inspiration! ;)
ProCoacoa

6 Years Ago

Haha, thank you Raymond! Hope it helped :)
You have to do what you have to do I guess...A wonderful poem...:)................

Posted 6 Years Ago


ProCoacoa

6 Years Ago

Thank you Sami :)
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).....................

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Tags: me, behind, focus, time, leave, slow, breath, step, reborn, death, light, hope, grow, faster, strength, happiness, better, day

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