Carry on

Carry on

A Poem by ProCoacoa

I don't know where I have been
Theres so much I haven't seen
Something new I learn everyday
A new hobby could take me away

I used to keep myself locked
But now I see it and I am shocked
How could I not have known?
I am no longer torn
This change was long due
Although I didn't believe I would come through
And now that the venom is gone
I have strength to carry on

© 2013 ProCoacoa


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You snapped out of it....
Nice little write here..

Enjoyed it

Scott

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ProCoacoa

7 Years Ago

Thank you Scott!
A poem with a heartbeat, moving ever forward to the betterment of it's master. Well Done! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ProCoacoa

7 Years Ago

Thanks Raymond :)
a simple but very inspiring piece....thanx for sharing


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ProCoacoa

7 Years Ago

Thank you Sonnie :)
The strength within...A powerful poem...:)..................

Posted 7 Years Ago


ProCoacoa

7 Years Ago

Thank you Sami :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).................
We always have that strength within ourselves. We just don't know how to wake it up. LOL
Glad you had awaken it now, pro.
This has great rhythm and rhyme.
Cheers!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ProCoacoa

7 Years Ago

Thanks Dhaye :)
Sometimes we are so bitter for so long we don't realize when we are'nt any more.All the while life is passing us by.Lovely my friend:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ProCoacoa

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Vidya! Your reviews are always a pleasure to read.
Vidya Bacchus

7 Years Ago

You are welcome and now i should say thank you lol :)

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Added on December 18, 2013
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