My Body Aches For your Presence

For Karen.

 

My chest is soft in your presence as if

I can finally breath in your gentle teaching

I ache for something you bring to me

The solid serenity of your attentive touch

 

My hope leaps in my heart as if to catch

The splendour of your youthful straightforwardness

You carry the light of hidden flowers

Into my spleen making me a holistic water-bed

 

For fine and tender emotions to take root

Little by little we come together like minerals

A lightning bolt making its way past blue flowers

I eat the brown sugar from your sultry hands

 

And thank you for sharing the journey with me

 

 

 

My chest is wiser and lighter, having known you.

 

Reviews

[Christina]

Christina
Christina

You're pretty good at this adoration too, these line in particular were gorgeous,

"Little by little we come together like minerals
A lightning bolt making its way past blue flowers
I eat the brown sugar from your sultry hands"

You paint vividly with your words, I enjoyed it!

[Prophecy]

Adoration! Heck yeah, one of the first things I do everyday, adore someone.

[Christina]

:-)