Sugary Rats & Bats

Sugary Rats & Bats

A Poem by Dhara_Ditzy Kat



A weird thing is love

Its prongs piercing

The murkiest of hearts

Sly as a weasel’s fart

Bamboozling truth

In peppered lanes

In the most cunning

Hardwired brains

Making hardcore felons

Love struck rats

Sing in icky, sugared pain

A weird thing is love  

Making men out of trolls

Trolls out of men   

For the love of witches

Slyly posing as women

Caustic below.....

Candy above......

Brooms tucked in hems

A weird thing is love


© 2020 Dhara_Ditzy Kat


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LOL I have a pair of those spectacles... you know, the rosy ones:/ the problem is i cant see very well without spectacles so i rarely take them off. Now you might be thinking Bunny why don't you just change your prescription? And my response generally is I love to see the beauty in everything, even if i get hit over the head with the occasional broomstick:)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

5 Months Ago

Thank you dear Bunny :) Watch that broomstick though ;)



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You're singing my tune here! It's been decades since I pursued love & these are all the reasons why! People just never turn out to be what they act like (brilliant line: "caustic below & candy above"! -- and so many more!) I believe that the more a person wants/craves/pursues love, the more prone he/she is to all these traps. I believe there's a ton of love to be reaped from this world, but it just doesn't look like what these love-craving others seem to be in the market for! Love your slightly-stinging rebuke, along with your uninhibited slamdunk descriptions! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

5 Months Ago

Wowza! I'm super happy happy now dear Margie! Love you for these words!! Theres plenty of love in th.. read more
I don't know the who or what of this but I enjoyed this naughty piece, Ms. DitzyKat. Your claws are as cute as you.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

5 Months Ago

My tiny claws and furry paws
are as funny and smart as your hee-haws.
ThankMeow!
AJNJ

5 Months Ago

I can vouch for it. You're welcome Ms. Kat. :)
an enjoyable reference to that wonderful occasion and the super cute little kitty cat video'd is just toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.
Even my puppy would approve!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Dhara_Ditzy Kat

5 Months Ago

Hahaha kitty loves appreciation 💕 Meow!
LOL I have a pair of those spectacles... you know, the rosy ones:/ the problem is i cant see very well without spectacles so i rarely take them off. Now you might be thinking Bunny why don't you just change your prescription? And my response generally is I love to see the beauty in everything, even if i get hit over the head with the occasional broomstick:)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

5 Months Ago

Thank you dear Bunny :) Watch that broomstick though ;)
Love has many interpretations. Those you touch upon, form a well rounded and entertaining concept for the reader to consider. Well done Dhara

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reviewing this writing so kindly. I am encouraged.
I really love ur twisted and awkwardly witty use of words and metaphoric descriptions..."it can bamboozle reality in the most hard wired brain"...it's brilliant...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Jane. It makes me happy I could convey a bit of the desired effect :)
Well they do say that love can move mountains. I certainly believe it is all powerful. It can be strange indeed the way it works. You convey its power well in your lines. Dhara.

Chris



Posted 2 Years Ago


Dhara_Ditzy Kat

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the kind review.
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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