I Love You

I Love You

A Poem by Dhara_Ditzy Kat
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Mwah Meow 😽

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I love you in sun and rain
I love you on the windiest plain
I love you in the palm of pain
I love you like sweet sugarcane
I love you for no loss or gain
I love you if no gold remains
I love you if I rage insane
I love you when I'm most humane
I love you if they show disdain
I love you if they be profane
I love you on holy terrain
I love you in devil's domain
I love you with a blissed-out brain
I love you with a red migraine
I love you as the fates ordain
I love you in Jupiter's reign
I love you on a lumbering train
I love you on a swift airplane
I love you in the tightest chains
I love you as a soaring crane
I love you wild as a hurricane
I love you staid, full of restrain
I love you till I can't explain
I love you till I sound inane
I love you as chilly chow-main
I love you like bitter champagne
I love you till the last refrain
I love you now and then again

© 2020 Dhara_Ditzy Kat


Author's Note

Dhara_Ditzy Kat
There's no limit to our love. This is for my friends on the Cafe! Thank you for all the love! 😸

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Lol! We get it! You love us all! :)))). However, somewhere deep down, this reads to me as a love ode to tuna and not so much your cafe friends here! Seriously though, its a cute outpouring of love and friendship and as your repetition shows, it knows no bounds. Some of your mentioned places are quite hilarious and most appropriate for a poet of feline inclination! This reader always appreciates your support of her efforts so the friendship and feelings are mutual. A lovely and simple gesture, Ms Kat! :))

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Months Ago

Thank you my lovely and talented friend 😻 I love my tuna but you're equally appreciated! You're a.. read more



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I have been known to throw down a rhyming riff or two, but this puts me to shame! Wow! My most admired trait in any artist is to be as unlike everyone else as possible & this is that. I was catching the sense that this poem was "revving up" -- starting out with bright, but still anchored ideas, ramping up & up to the more sparkling free-association-type star plucks. Reading you is an antidote to the mundane squirmishes on facebook! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

3 Months Ago

Thanks a lot my wonderful friend Margie! Hugs!
Great to see love doing the rounds, not enough of it going around.
Good thing about the cafe, nobody gets killed and most don't take themselves too seriously.
Glad Trump's not on the cafe, too much love going around, that's a national guard sanction for sure.

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Dhara_Ditzy Kat

5 Months Ago

We should actually get him here. His poems would be silly though I fear. Thank you for stopping by d.. read more
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A very affectionate poem, Dhara. It seems that your love knows no bounds! Quite unusual for a cat, i would say. Most of them only love others when they need something. Its a long list of fine examples in so many original expressions. Its a generous poem.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

5 Months Ago

I’m a loyal cat to those who really value me and care for me. Thanks a lot Mr. Picasso.
Love is the best thing in the whole. and more beautiful when you the one that truly that loves you they way you. Superb

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

5 Months Ago

Thanks a lot Borice :)
A wonderful poem shared for love dear friend. I enjoyed the flow of thought leading to the proper ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

3 Months Ago

Thanks a lot dear friend. :)
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
This is the first time I have ever seen an aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa rhyme scheme. If the recipient of these lines doesn't realize you're in love, there may be some hearing impairment involved.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Months Ago

I love inventing something ( laughing so much here) Thanks for the smiles and laughs sir John. Appre.. read more
John the Baptist

6 Months Ago

Never been called Sir John before. Have you OK'd this with the Queen?
i may be wrong, but i think there is love expressed here! :))))
the repetition works so well and the near rhyme adds to the expression...
simple but clever at the same time...we appreciate you, Dhara,
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Months Ago

I kept repeating and repeating till I was sure I had got my point across! I wasn't taking any chance.. read more
it is and I say this as emphatically as my poor keyboard allows IMPOSSIBLE not to LOVE YOU BACK! And it is Impossible not to love this poem you know how much the BuNnY loves RHyMe:) it tickles his ears:) and makes him roll in the grass:) I go and hop over to my writing den now:) thank you Dhara (not so ditzy) Kitty

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Months Ago

A lovable bunny with a keyboard
Is always appreciated & adored!

You inspired.. read more
Robert Trakofler

6 Months Ago

I'm a blushing bunny now:)
love you back Kat! "I love you" must never become mundaine eh!? :))) the red migraine and the chilly chow mein (sp? main) ;)
i can't agree with you more Ditzy .. the Cafe' is full and varied and wide and narrow ... and very few invasions of destructivity enter nor endure ... our openness, acceptance and striving to understand each poem and poet is really fine stuff ... God bless .. stay well and stay safe!
E.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Months Ago

Hellooooo my dear friend! Its been quite a while and I am purring with joy to see you! I am nodding .. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

we need you Kitty Kat! :) you have made my day today .. i feel the warmth :))))))))))))
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Lol! We get it! You love us all! :)))). However, somewhere deep down, this reads to me as a love ode to tuna and not so much your cafe friends here! Seriously though, its a cute outpouring of love and friendship and as your repetition shows, it knows no bounds. Some of your mentioned places are quite hilarious and most appropriate for a poet of feline inclination! This reader always appreciates your support of her efforts so the friendship and feelings are mutual. A lovely and simple gesture, Ms Kat! :))

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Months Ago

Thank you my lovely and talented friend 😻 I love my tuna but you're equally appreciated! You're a.. read more

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