Structure Stricture

Structure Stricture

A Poem by Dhara_Ditzy Kat
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There's a Dick In the Pic 😾

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(Con)descend your mountain
patronise too the sea
crystallise ur pearls
of sycophancy
In the murky 
depths far
far away
from
me

© 2020 Dhara_Ditzy Kat


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Author's Note

Dhara_Ditzy Kat
Leave the newbies alone. They don't need lessons from you in poetry writing or form or structure. This is their answer to you dickhead 😼

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I totally get what you're saying about the poetry police, which I try not to be part of! I started at the cafe 5 years ago after a lifelong professional writing career & I had strong ideas about what "good" writing was all about. The younger, fresher writers on this website have taught me a thing or two about losing my "corrective" approach (who cares about grammar & spelling, it's the HEART of a message that matters!) But I can also see this message in a very different way, about politics in the USA, which are so divided. I just don't want to hear that crap from "the other side" (Trump supporters) anymore. I tried to understand them, tolerate them, ignore them . . . but now I'm blocking them! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

PS this poem is superb in terms of making a poignant point!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Months Ago

I wrote this in sheer ire as a couple of my friends who are new on here are upset because they had s.. read more



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I think often critics intend for others to write just like they do, and if those poets don't? They hound them with cutting remarks, or just try to get them to see the light...change this change that...we are all individual voices...and there are varied tastes on the part of readers...we have to find our own voices...having others rewrite our poems does not help us get to that voice...maybe sometimes...but gently.
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Months Ago

Long, insincere, flattery-filled reviews. The unneccessary mailing and suggestions. Its an impositio.. read more
Dear Ditzy, my fav cat, this is a very pointed write. I looked for the dick, but alas it was so tiny my eyes couldn't see it. Never really been fond of the poetry police, they have a habit of suffocating creativity. Treats for you precious. Purrfect poem, got the message across you did.

Chris

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Months Ago

You're so on point, my dear friend Chris! They stifle creativity! And destroy confidence. I'm so gla.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

6 Months Ago

Welcome my furry friend :)
I totally get what you're saying about the poetry police, which I try not to be part of! I started at the cafe 5 years ago after a lifelong professional writing career & I had strong ideas about what "good" writing was all about. The younger, fresher writers on this website have taught me a thing or two about losing my "corrective" approach (who cares about grammar & spelling, it's the HEART of a message that matters!) But I can also see this message in a very different way, about politics in the USA, which are so divided. I just don't want to hear that crap from "the other side" (Trump supporters) anymore. I tried to understand them, tolerate them, ignore them . . . but now I'm blocking them! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

PS this poem is superb in terms of making a poignant point!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Months Ago

I wrote this in sheer ire as a couple of my friends who are new on here are upset because they had s.. read more

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