Bippety-Bop

Bippety-Bop

A Poem by Dhara_Ditzy Kat
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Shape Poetry - A big fat sun

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Bippety-Bop

Hippety Hippety Hop

He melted like a paddle pop

In the face of her bloated sun

Till all there was left of him was

A pee-stained puddle that run

Down down her wee knickers

When the clock struck one

Hippety Hippety Hop

Bippety-Bop

 



© 2020 Dhara_Ditzy Kat


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Dhara_Ditzy Kat
A big fun poem.


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Very creative, Ditzy! I find shape poems a novelty except when the words within the shape can stand by themselves, and yours do here. It's a great big ball of fun, your poem, and you did a great job with your lines and form. It hits the funny bone just as you have intended. Well done!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

2 Months Ago

Oooh. Thanks Brilliance. You are a good sharp critic so if you like it I am happy happy. Meows and p.. read more



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This is so cute, much enjoyed this write

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

5 Days Ago

Thank you so much for stopping by dear Kim 💕
i don't know cats too much, i am a dog lover and i know if you stamp your feet in front of an old dog he knows you want to play and he is game.
well it just happened to me..

thank you for this funny shaped poem

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

1 Month Ago

Thanks a lot my friend! I love this very lively review!
iliOZ

1 Month Ago

hi Kat, my i invite you to view my mr. bump?
something in common ...
I love this poem ... I have two kitty Kats...
Elisa Clover Doolittle (a female) and Snowflake... a Siamese male.
each one spade or neutered. both were feral young kittens
that live on our Sunporch separated (from us humans) by glass panneled doors into our family room.
We live in a large two story home, and I cannot with my infirmities
let them have the run of the house with guests staying overnight.
They have large windows to watch the birds and squirrels.
I keep their room clean and them with fresh water and good food.
They have a big round Oak Table to sleep on or cuddle.
Both are neutered... but still affectionate.
Snowflake slipped out the Sunporch door and wandered the Circle of the neighborhood for five days and nights. I left a Cage on the deck of the Sunporch with food and a trap door. Since then he seems content to be reunited with "Clover". Such is life. gently, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for such a lovely review to me, dear Miss Pat! Sending you love ❤
This is so refreshing and Brightens anyone’s day for sure. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dhara_Ditzy Kat

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much for appreciating :)
Insight "MH"

2 Months Ago

You are welcome.
This is very zany, which is a quality I admire becuz I do not possess it! I try to write outside the dots, but you seem to effortlessly write outside gravity. I love the playfulness & the made-up sound words. I love the irreverence of telling a love story that isn't all gooey & sweet. Great fun to read! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

2 Months Ago

I'm thrilled, my dear friend! Thanks & Hugs!
Aw, this poem was really adorable Ditzy :) Thanks for sharing, I found this really enjoyable!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

2 Months Ago

Thanks for enjoying this poem Mr. Malarkey. You're so nice and kind.
I loved this, a melted popsicle displayed in a perfect drop. That was my take anyway. A genius bit of poetry, you captured youthfulness and playfulness in a very mature forum.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

2 Months Ago

Aww....what an adorable review dear Ulmus! I try to be cute and playful even when I'm not so nice. T.. read more
Waving at you Ditzy. What a clever and creative Kat you are. This is a perfectly rounded, sunny, funny poem. It brightened up my early morning visit. To my shame I have never tried shape poetry. You excel at it.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

2 Months Ago

*Waving back*
Thank you so much. dear Chris. I love your visits always. So happy you appreci.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Months Ago

Please do :)
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

2 Months Ago

Aww...sure will...you stay safe and smiling my dear friend!
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Shape poems now, Ditzy? What other tricks do you have under your fur? Lol. You are one multi-talented Kat! It's a very strong sun that can make someone melt like a puddle, and more so to run down the knickers! Such an icky, sticky mess! This is another clever little creation from your creative paw. Makes me wonder what you will produce for us next. Much enjoyed, Ms Kat! Love the shape. They are much harder to do than they appear and you mastered it, here!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

2 Months Ago

My next shape will be a fish, dear Jamila. Or you suggest something. I'm really really hooked onto.. read more
Another perfect shape
you are becoming a perfectly geometric poet
Enjoyed the fun

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

2 Months Ago

I'm trying to become as round as I can. Thank you for looking in on this one Dave :)
Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

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