pearls

pearls

A Poem by Prritiy


clouds over moon
ah shimmering pearls

locks hiding

~ Prritiy

© 2013 Prritiy


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what a shining short poem.Quite felt the shimmer there and great image to encapsulate it with.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot.
short but so beautiful :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

Thank you Lily :)
Wonderful imagery and reality together.
I am looking out to the sky now to see such a lovely scene.
Congratulations,dear friend:)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

you are always welcome :)
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

:)
I like it...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

i knew it was coming :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Hahaha...:)
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

:) keep laughing.....
Short poem in simile - the moon like a pearl - seems a haiku but not conformed with the 5/7/5 syllable of Japanese format. Modern haiku can be.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

thankyou, this is not haiku, just a reply to lines someone wrote :)
Ency Bearis

11 Years Ago

I see : )

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Added on May 2, 2013
Last Updated on May 19, 2013
Tags: clouds, moon, pearls, locks, shimmering

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Prritiy
Prritiy

India



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