The bliss

(lying on bed thinking how love makes us live)

Ah the bliss

The rain brings

To parched earth

 

Same is life

Your love brings

To my lifeless heart

 

The fresh look

The trees adorn

Drenched by drops

 

Your warm smile

Does my heart adorn

Whenever our love drops

 

The flowers dance

Quivering with joy

As cool breeze blows along

 

My being radiates

Spreading out joy

For, to each other we belong.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

this is exquisite poetry, simple but gorgeous. i saw your kind comments over the past few days and they did not go unnoticed, as you may know, i have had things to think about and a heavy heart. sorry it took me forever to get back to your poetry....you are very gifted, to say the very least!

[Prritiy]

It is perfectly alright, you kindly take your own sweet time. I understand your constraint, your pain is quite visible in your writing.
Thankyou so much for your kind words, it is real encouraging from a person who is so talented.
God Bless You.

[ayosonolowo]

For to each other we belong
nice poem,
i really like it

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much for the time spared and appreciation.

[ayosonolowo]

You're welcome

[Nkosana B Masuku]

What a beautiful piece of poetry.Great penning.Enjoyed the read

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot for giving your time and for your kind words.

[Nkosana B Masuku]

you are welcome

[Cassie]

Beautifully done. Now shelved in my library.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou Cassie for your affection and honor :)

[Sami Khalil]

I think this is one of your best writes. bravo...:)

[Prritiy]

O Thankyou so much, am happy you said so :)

[Sami Khalil]

I did . You are welcome...:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Prritiy]

:) without this trademark of yours, its not complete

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Ah ha just as I thought the poem was going slightly out of balance with the 5th verse, the 6th delivers a wonderful counter balance and beauty is not only restored it is enhanced by your words.

[Prritiy]

My gratitude for these wonderful words, they are encouraging, thanks :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

So romantic...the bliss that love brings...
" My being radiates
Spreading out joy
For, to each other we belong"

[Prritiy]

Thanks dear Dhaye :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome pretty Prritiy. :)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Peter H]

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm , the love theme poetry ... they are vast around here , good write i liked this one its above the average one .

[Prritiy]

I am grateful for your encouraging words, every word means a lot, thankyou.

[zainul]

Each line brings joy like a cool shower of rain.
Wonderful blissful thoughts expressed so eloquently!

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Zainul for such wonderful words :)

[zainul]

This is great pleasure on my part.:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[Gaurav Walia]

Very well written piece...Kudos!

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much for your kind words.

[Gaurav Walia]

Sure No Problem Ma'am... :D

[Prritiy]

:)