Blue Girls and Sam

A little late for the contest, Rock and Roll, but this one is for you:)

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Looking for the perfect fall reading. Try the Wisp.

Bara dreams of the dark-haired boy, but one blustery day, the dark-haired boy is replaced by a silvery spectre who haunts her even when she is awake, pulling her deeper into dreams and closer to secrets she is better off not knowing. Waking up is no relief. The fictional east-coast town of Windfall offers its own surprises: immortal witches, coffee-loving werewolves, and dream boys come to life. A dead man’s diary names Bara a Clavigen and calls upon her to cage the evil. She must defeat the witch who has ensnared the Wisp in a piece of enchanted amber. Unfortunately the dreams have not revealed all. Always watching, a demon waits to prey upon her young soul.

Author's Note

A morning moon is a visible daytime moon.

Reviews

[Cory Barrett]

First it was so fun to read! and blooming courgette is really brilliant, and humor to top it off. So witty, and just wonderful!

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Cory:)

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Ha ha! Really, really wonderful, Pryde. Anything that tugs on the heart and brings a smile to the face. You shine sometimes, you really do.

100 buckets of true-blue wordy-goo

[Pryde Foltz]

Haha. You tuned in just at the right time. I just added the last two stanzas. Thank you, luminescent one.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Nice use of rhyme and I like the characters. Was it a happy ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Coyote. For you I added a new ending.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome and I like the happy ending.

[An owl on the moon]

Smiling at the playful blue ode, and to a great friend... Rock and Roll here... Thank you for sharing something so rhythmic and wondrous! :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Craig.

[Troy Henson]

This was great Pryde. Love the spin on Seuss. A huge fan I am!

regards
Troy

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Troy.

[Lyn Anderson]

Your notes are quite often almost as good as the poem. A very interesting twist on Seuss -- love putting Smurfette in there.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks, KL.

[Frieda P]

Slide me some ham, priceless Pryde! :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks Frieda:)

[kublakhan27]

Haha The clever factor is almost overwhelming, in a good way of course...for the record, I hated the Smurfs as a kid and still do to this day...awesome work Pryde :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks Steve. I was a fan myself … but wonder at the one female, now talk about overwhelming:)

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮Aw, sucks you were too late for the contest because this is great! ^-^╰☆╮

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks, Brittany.

[Anand Sehgal]

I loved it so very much that i can't express..... Wish the story was a bit longer !
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[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks Anand … I wrote this on a lark but I did toy with a couple more stanzas:)