A Christmas Dream

A Rhyming Christmas Tale ... sit back and listen

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

Your voice, diction and tonality could make the process of extensive dental work sound appealing so when you write such a sweet and actually appealing thing such as this it is like unwrapping your favorite piece of candy really examining it in your mouth letting it melt slowly not expediting the process by chewing just letting it melt in your mouth and savoring it to the last drop oh wait this is a poem not candy or was this a poem about candy I forget now. Clement Clarke Moore would be delighted to read this as was the Bunny:)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Robert. I adapted this from a longer story I wrote, once upon a time. Don't know where the story has gotten to but this xmas dream lives one. But my you are ahead of the curve with this one:):):) Merry XMAS:)

[Robert Trakofler]

I read everything you post just going down the line and opening the presents as they come it like an advent calendar:):/

[Pryde Foltz]

That made me smile:)

[Gee]

Tis the first time my 7 month old cocker spaniel has heard Christmas mentioned, we listened together, me enjoying greatly him impatiently waiting for his walk :))
Good morning

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you and good morning. I hope the sun was shining and the air fresh:)

[Michael G. Smith]

I love the ambience the accompanies your beautiful Christmas tale. Your editing is superb. I know this takes quite a bit of work especially when doing many videos.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks, Micheal:)

[Ruby Heggie (PB Jacobs)]

Documentation
4/4/18
2:46 PM U.S. CST
"My Review of A Christmas Dream by Pryde Foltz, A Fellow Writer's Cafe Author"
by PB Jacobs (www.writerscafe.org)

Hey, Pryde

I'd make this review On the Jibble (my Strawberry Jibble Review Image), but I don't think the Writer's Cafe Review System will let me. So, I'll have to make do with thei image on the Writer's Cafe Email System.

My, you are you quite the enthusiast! I like the phonetical sprigs of English you put on your words, and the little bursts of emotional English you put on them, too! Gee, what's wrong with this website? Is it overrun by a bunch of money grubbing chumps (cyber bullies)? I see this more than often on this website. Hopefully these money grubbing chumps get a Christmas of their own. Some people just don't get reality! These idiots seem to be wrapped up in their authoritarian rebel and omnipotent magalomaniac personality types. I wonder if there is an online way to can them and forget them? That would be great, for some of these cyberchumps!

I love your video, and yes, it has just the right amount of feisty and naughty! No need to freak, I am being formal to your work, as I do get professional standards of task environment social logic.

You are kind of into this, I see, and yes, I'd spruce my review up, but, I can't.

I do love the music, as it reminds me of a middle-class type of movie, kind of like "Home Alone." Is this what you are getting at, or is this movie ingrained on the fabric of your mind. You're definitely the happy, happy, joy, joy type!

I notice subtle changes in your reading affect, too. Something tell's me you have your yeah, whatever personality type down pat! I gotta kind of like this! Great job!

I'm not misspelling, intentionally, as it's just the cyberchumps, and the usual piety party they throw.

PB Jacobs-Cyberchumps! Can them, online, and forget them, online!

[Dinesh Kumar]

Wonderful piece of poetry
Really enjoyed

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This was enchanting, and your words felt like a close friend. Well done!

[jennifer little]

nice i loved it it was great keep up the good work

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Jennifer:)

[jennifer little]

your welcome

[J. Hampton]

warm/fuzzy/magical/cozy and adorable piece!

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks, J:)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Pryde... soft feathers of snow fall gently on the thirsty ground... your poetry inspires the edges of eternity. Amen truly, Pat Merry Christmas dear heart

[Pryde Foltz]

Hi Patricia. Sorry for taking so long to get back to you. I hope your new year has started with wonder and happiness.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Pryde... just moved into a new home built in 1988, full of nooks and corners with a second floor nestled in tall pine trees and birds galore.... may be inspirational for poetry. Happy days for you and yours. truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Pryde... here it is November 2018.
I must order your work from Amazon.com *** You’re gifted with more magic than sparkles of glittery snow. I am mesmerized with your gentleness. truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful dear Pryde. I always love your work. I hope you and family are having a Merry Christmas and have a safe and fun New Year.
Coyote

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Coyote:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Pryde.