Lost

Lost

A Poem by Patrick O'Neil

When you say something.
When you do something.
When you touch a heart
in such a way it shattered.

Is there a way to mend?
Is there a way to save?
Can any words, written or spoken
even begin to heal the broken.

When, love is lost, can it be found?
When all that is left is goodbye.
When all you have now,
is bittersweet memories.
of a sweet bunny lost,
never to be found.

© 2014 Patrick O'Neil


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this piece is really interesting:)

Is there a way to mend?
Is there a way to save?
Can any words, written or spoken
even begin to heal the broken.

well, i think i have an answer for your question:)
life has its own reasons for all that we face, is always for good and the is the same for sadness
it makes us stronger :)

Is there a way to mend?
Is there a way to save?

THE only way i think is to have hope, as it fuels us from inside:)

When, love is lost, can it be found?
yes, it can be found, only if you have faith in it:)

simple answer for your complicated questions:) i hope that helps!

wonderful write!




Posted 9 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, that was really wonderful comments. I do believe hope is key, and sometimes we al.. read more
Saumya

9 Years Ago

my pleasure!:) u r welcm:)
I like this write. Shattered in the bittersweet memories. Thank you for sharing...:)........................

Posted 9 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Welcome...:)........................

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Added on September 28, 2014
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Patrick O'Neil
Patrick O'Neil

Gauteng, South Africa



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I am just an average man, with a normal live, and then suddenly i started writing poetry. Go figure??? I also post original rock style music on Sound Cloud, check it out if you are in to that sort .. more..

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