Autumn

Two haikus about autumn.

Gentle green ocean -

Golden Autumn laps the shore,

Quiet and peaceful.

 

Floating down gently,

The breeze carries it caref'lly,

Far, far, and away.

Author's Note

How do you like it? Don't tell me if you like it, tell me how you like it, if at all. :)

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

I like it as it paints a visual portrait with your words...though short, it is a concise message...
especially like the words.....autumn lapping the shore.
but again, as I write longer pieces, it is perhaps difficult for me to review works that are brief. I do think that this is...................
Nice!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

You have a great Haiku there.

Do check the spelling of the last work in this 7 Should it be carefree

The breeze carries it caref'lly,

I find Haikus so much fun. I have a contest Haiku Strings. Maybe you would like to enter.

Author: Nancy Lee Shrader
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[Maria Retz]

I can see the ocean when reading this poem. I love your imagery, you a very good at painting inner pictures in the readers mind.

[Puzzle-bot]

It's quite a pretty, peaceful poem, and it feels warm and priendly. I like it because it is pretty and peaceful, and warm and friendly.