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This Is How Love Dies

This Is How Love Dies

A Poem by Purbleazaleya
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this is about how love is destroyed by materialistic wants

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She dreams

A love so pure

Pure as falling snow

Radiant as reflected light

Shall always be

Eternal and sacred

Untainted

Never deceived into changing

 

Twilight crept into day

As how a truth crept in

Broken faith brought broken hearts

Grief staining the pure within

Bitter the poison brewed

Bubbling venom spewed in rage

Like black wine spilled on pure linen

 

Tears blurred out her vision

Sorrow blurred out her mind

The heart intoxicated by worldly needs

Needs that strayed her soul

Washed away the pure and innocent

Of what truly mattered

 

The night ushered in darkness

Same as the one sowed in her heart

Same as the one staining her love

Hurting it then killing it

Till it yielded and was no more

And she lost all of what she dreamt of before

 

© 2014 Purbleazaleya


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"Greif" - grief.
"Same as he one staining her love" - he? or is there a word missing?

I felt your thoughts and understood.

We dance alike
to the sound of heartbeats
and dreams
and sharing moments of magyk
and life.

We share all the tears
in our "darkness",
the moon's faded glory,
and the silent sunrise.

We remember
what smiling felt ...like
...slowly -
but we DO remember.

Chris

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Purbleazaleya

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the corrections! I will edit it soon, my English Grammar isn't that great so I highly app.. read more
Chris

8 Years Ago

anytime...take care.



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Simply amazing piece of art and simply superb!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Purbleazaleya

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading!
A. Amos

8 Years Ago

You're most welcome
written and beautifully expressed. Enjoyed it much!


Posted 8 Years Ago


Purbleazaleya

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reading
This has a haunting feeling to it - it's got so much emotion that it's hard not to feel it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Purbleazaleya

8 Years Ago

thank you for reading this!
Love this poem, very well thought through. We all dream of a "love so pure" and so perfect that we may soon lose our perspective of true love. We don't always get what we want, and love is one of them. Not everything goes as planned, and love is inevitable that something, a fallout perhaps, will happen.
Heartbreak is so sad, and it happens too often! It's not fair for anyone to go through the traumas of heartbreak, as nobody's hearts need to go through that, do they?
Finely penned, much congratulations! xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Purbleazaleya

8 Years Ago

Yes, sad reality of life is that we don't get everything we want and we have to choose between thing.. read more
1Disawsum

8 Years Ago

Yes, it's really heart-wrenching sometimes! No problem, this was a lovely poem.
"Greif" - grief.
"Same as he one staining her love" - he? or is there a word missing?

I felt your thoughts and understood.

We dance alike
to the sound of heartbeats
and dreams
and sharing moments of magyk
and life.

We share all the tears
in our "darkness",
the moon's faded glory,
and the silent sunrise.

We remember
what smiling felt ...like
...slowly -
but we DO remember.

Chris

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Purbleazaleya

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the corrections! I will edit it soon, my English Grammar isn't that great so I highly app.. read more
Chris

8 Years Ago

anytime...take care.
Congrats on a beautiful poem! Some wonderfully thought out and constructed poems, "The heart intoxicated by worldly needs" to name only one. This style suits you very well, the first stanza is simple and beautiful, probably my favourite. Well Done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Purbleazaleya

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much! Glad that you thought my poem is beautiful
Wow this was really intense. Started off one way and did a whole 360. Failed love, depression, can sink ones heart into dark corners. Well done my friend! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Purbleazaleya

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I really appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and review it :-D
Poignant and true words. Evokes emotion and it transported me; beautiful imagery. Well done. -Olivia

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Purbleazaleya

8 Years Ago

Thanks, I'm so glad you found it so beautiful

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Added on May 26, 2014
Last Updated on June 4, 2014
Tags: relationships, love, materialistic, regret

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Purbleazaleya
Purbleazaleya

Kuala Lumpur, Setapak, Malaysia



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