Graphite

Graphite

 

Worlds of magic and anime

characters my mind makes

people of different attitude.

Wish my mind could choose.

 

Mind full of ideas

I grab the graphite out of steal.

The white planes ready

for the magic medley.

 

Curves, straight lines, and erasing,

Planes no longer white, taking

What punishment the graphite makes

is worth the critters on the page.

Thinking of happiness, I think of that.

Author's Note

This is a poem that my cousin wrote. She wanted me to review it. I liked it, so I thought I'd put it on here for the rest of you to review and give comments on it since she doesn't have an account herself.

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[Fallen Angel]

PLEASE GIVE YOUR OPINIONS!! Constructive criticism is MUCH appreciated!! :)