Such Lies

An entry for the 'In Twelve Words Part 1' contest. Hope you like!

They said you’d come back to me. 

The army is a liar. 

Author's Note

Thanks for reading!

Reviews

[Call Me Blu]

This was a breath of fresh air for me. To many people turn it into a huge affair with sobbing and endless dark and such. This simplified it down to it's essence.

[Sunflower 20]

great job ^_^

[nono]

Short, simple, and to the point, but I find this more a quote, either way, it's very nice, and the emotion is summed up easily, especially since you put 'liar' in italics. You did a nice job with presenting as well, keep up the great work!

[Sarah J. Kelleher]

This is so spiteful, I sure hope you got an award for this! I loved it!

[RLT's Heart]

nice

[indu]

hmm.. good one actually