Exactly What I've Been Waiting For

Exactly What I've Been Waiting For

A Poem by QC

And then I feel his fingers like
Satin flow across my skin
And I think I could stay this way for
How can my heart beat so fast
It's like it's trying to beat
It's way from my chest
And into his heart because all I feel 
Is him
And all I can think
Is him
And all I can taste 
Is him
Am I doing this right
Would he like me to
Satin up and down my arms and across my
Why is it so hot in here
I think I could burn forever and ever and ever and
Cushion pressing against my spine and suddenly 
Things are exactly right and where they're 
Suppose to be
But oh, I can't believe it;
I can't believe he's
actually
kissing
me 
back. 

© 2011 QC


Author's Note

QC
Fact: I've never been kissed, but I'm hoping someday it feels like this.

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for never being kissed, you captured it perfectly!
amazing emotion. :)
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Posted 11 Years Ago


AMAZING poem!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Thought 1: AMAZING
2: Great image and emoton
3:Great story and wording
Luved it! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


its so sweet and romanic, I've never feel anythign alike, hopefully I will, Its great! Amazing! Wonderful! So sweet and romantic which warm my heart up! The ending is really great asll well, one word per sentence, thats really amazing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow. I had my doubts about reading your poems because you book is so good, and I wasn't sure your level on poetry. Way to prove me wrong! some poems end up boring me to half death but this was quite interesting.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This one is beautiful and romantic! Well written!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh I miss that feeling. Beautifully put. Everything's so sensual and erotic from only a simple kiss. Amazing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is soo good. I love the unfinished thoughts and the way everything jumps around. Its like we're inside her head. Its really awesome and I love how it ends.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The way you wrote this make me it work perfectly with the subject.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow. I love how you have some incomplete thoughts, which sort of create the impression that she's breathless ( which would make sense of course). I love the idea of satin, too. Very sensual. ;) Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 23, 2010
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