Am I in love with you?

Am I in love with you?

A Poem by .quan.011.
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Another peom but a romantic one this time

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Am I in love with you

I ask myself this question every time I see you

 Every time you walk by my heart beats faster

When you smile at me when you see my face

Am I in love with you

Or is it just lust that drives me to your arms

But can lust drive a man to become some protective

To do things that he wouldn’t normally do

Am I in love with you

If so then the only question I have for you is

Are you in love with me

© 2010 .quan.011.


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.quan.011.
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Love or lust, the question of a lifetime. How can we know which is true?

"But can lust drive a man to become some protective"

This is a start, but is your love returned? Nice job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Short and simple. There is clear emotion behind each sentence that impacts the reader. It is truly great. Love is a mysterious thing that most of us will experience. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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this really good i love the flow of it

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awww this is a very sweet poem love it

Posted 10 Years Ago


Is this love or lust....the ever lasting question....I like this poem for the honesty and the point on the face question.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this poem. I captures the fast moving sometimes chaotic thoughts that those emotions trigger. I asked myself the same question and 5 years later I am still not sure whether it was love or lust but I know that it was an experience i wouldn't change.

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is a mindblowing and creative concept . keep it up

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is incredibly simplistic with not enough layers to honestly call it a poem at all. There needs to be depth, imagery, feelings, emotion rather than throwing down some thoughts onto a page and going voila, a poem! This isn't even really a stream of consciousness. It's merely a jumbled collection of ideas.

Posted 10 Years Ago


sweet. short, precise, and sweet

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Hello my name is Quan and I'm new here. I write a complete of stories that I will update. I don't do any peoms, because I'm not good at them. Thanks for reading and review my work. My Novel .. more..

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