Black Box

Black Box

A Poem by Quaddeth
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This really is just a poem about being trapped inside of comfort, I wrote it last night after being peeved by this thought and I wasn't able to sleep until I got it down.

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This little black box, it encapsulates me

It makes me free

I confide in it

It confides in me

It keeps me out

I have room to flee

  as I ease

  slowly forward

  lonely coward

loosing himself in his false sense of security

© 2010 Quaddeth


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Quaddeth
I'd have to say this is one of my favourites that i've written. Please review in a constructive manner.

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There is a rich, personal depth to the confessions found in this poem. You give us such a visually stirring work, allowing us to sense something vividly that takes place within your mind.. that sense of being trapped and loosed as well. Very profoundly moving!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It seems the best way to be at times but how much do we lose ourselves in that state?:) This is suffocating, in a good way lol xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


THIS IS STRANGLY TRUE...
A FEELING OF HAVING PEACE...
IN A SENSE...
THIS ONE SPOT...
THAT JUST SO HAPPENS...
TO BE IN OUR HEADS...
I REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS...
DEFINETLY ONE OF YOU BEST...
A FAVORITE OF MINE...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow. Powerful. It's amazing how the little things can make one connect to it! I think we've all felt like we get trapped in a "false sense of security," feeling as though we're lost in a big, scary world, our security blanket having been torn from us.

Posted 9 Years Ago


How interesting that the subject matter peeved you until you penned it. I know this well. Love so this short but complex work also.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This is absolutely lovely.
Written with simplicity, you managed to create a perfect image in my minds' eye.
Amazing job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


There is a rich, personal depth to the confessions found in this poem. You give us such a visually stirring work, allowing us to sense something vividly that takes place within your mind.. that sense of being trapped and loosed as well. Very profoundly moving!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it everyone needs something to confide in.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Quaddeth
Quaddeth

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