Life's ambiguity

Life's ambiguity

A Poem by Quaddeth
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Life is somewhat of an uncertainty and definately the phrase "Life doesn't come with a manual" springs to mind.

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Grow, Grow, Grow

I reap what you sow

Punishment indictment

A tsunami of wasted excitement

 

Hallucination, Hallucination, Hallucination

Here I stand God’s only son

Self-vindictive-narcissist

On a yellow brick road covered by mist

© 2010 Quaddeth


Author's Note

Quaddeth
The poem is regarding my troubles of late with me needing a change and falling victim to society and its unsophisocated humour, the typicality and conformist nature of my friendship group and my wanting to get out.

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This is far out man.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow…
In 3 or 4 lines….
You packed a great deal of things….
And it is profound and exiting….


Posted 13 Years Ago


I SEE WHAT YOU MEAN...
YOU MAKE A HUGE POINT...
WITH HARDLY ANY WORD...
ONLY A AMAZING WRITTER...
SUCH AS YOUSELF...
COULD DO SO...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Each line seems to be a powerful poem in itself. These glimpses are filled with rich thoughts and colorful emotions that set the stage for that canvass of life.. trying to see how the brush strokes align..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice visuals for such a concise read. Good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes! Love works about self discovey.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Just amazing. Loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


a wonderful creation....i love the way it ends...a lot of powerful emotions portrayed in the right amount

Posted 13 Years Ago


Life full of let downs, fallen promises. We think we're on
the right road, then something falters our vision.
Just my own point of view. Great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


wonderful piece. I love the ending most.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Quaddeth
Quaddeth

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