True.

True.

A Poem by Quiet Lonely Rush
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A Guy Met A Woman Who He Couldnt Get So He Knows Shes To Good To Be True To Be Wit Him.

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When I think about you
my heart be going up & down
singing to this lovely sound
when I take a look at you
I know it can be true.

As I hug you so tight
I dont want to miss the delight
cause i love being with you
sharing feelings towards you
cause you make it all true.

As your lips come to mine
so many fireworks come to pair
cause this not a forgetting night
for us to despair
But it must be all true just believing in you


© 2010 Quiet Lonely Rush


Author's Note

Quiet Lonely Rush
ignore grammar problems i write in my own way...so how u think of this poem?
i have alot more of poems in my own way..

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"As I hug you so tight
I dont want to miss the delight
cause i love being with you
sharing feelings towards you"

A splendid read and write...:)..................

Posted 10 Years Ago


I can dig it, I'm the same way when it comes to my stuff

Posted 14 Years Ago


This poem is simple but tells a story of love. I like the last stanza. the flow is mostly smooth. Thanks for posting.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 16, 2010
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Quiet Lonely Rush
Quiet Lonely Rush

Marion, IN



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Well 23 old me, who writes in his own way. Maybe it doesn't make any sense but it does it to me. Married Man to a lovely Manda. One Year so Far. lets make it very many to death do us part. I am a fa.. more..

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