Olivia

Olivia

A Poem by QuietlyCrash
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this was hard to write

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Plans you weren't aware of 
Are the ones that sting the most
Though you're the one not breathing
I am the one who's left a ghost

A shell of the girl I used to be
Pretending your loss is fine
But it mutilated and ended me
You were the one thing that was mine

You were here for just a minute
But my lord you were loved
I hope you'll always keep close      
Maybe watching from above


© 2015 QuietlyCrash


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This was an amazing read. Beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this was hard to read. Some very raw and deep emotion here. I can't say that I know how you feel at all but my sympathies are right with you and anyone else that must endure such a loss.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hard to write because it is so raw; your emotions flow in these words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is so sad...hard to understand why infants are taken like this...so soon after coming from the womb.

intense emotion in this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


QuietlyCrash

8 Years Ago

thanks so much for taking the time to read. I don't understand it either but I'm trying to.

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QuietlyCrash
QuietlyCrash

Pensacola, FL



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Hello, so here's the deal. I was placed on this glowing green orb and still trying to figure it all out For the moment most of my writing may be depressing and dark, but that's just because I'm sort .. more..

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