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Hommes Optare

Hommes Optare

A Poem by Sirajudin Matin


What deaf ears are these?

To contort such silken words,

That flow like molten gold,

From the eyes of an angel.

So frail was the voice

That fell with such beauty.

© 2008 Sirajudin Matin

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I would love to expand upon it one day, I have tried many times but I haven't been able to capture the thought again. I'll have to write it in a journal and read it every time I have a chance. I think I wrote it at the thought of forgiving a friend that I had been offended by, it gives me a warm fuzzy smile when I read; really wish I could remember it. All is well though I want to expand on this when I'm in a extremely good mood it just feels like it needs to be that way.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Its really short but it's really good. Would you ever be against expanding it? It seems like it could very easily keep flowing

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on February 26, 2008