Wake up

How can you know what you really need,

When all you do is watch society bleed.

It's time as a world, we all take heed,

For as human beings, we have to be freed.

Reviews

[♋ Iris ♋]

really beautiful. the way that everything comes together at the end. Its truly a wonderful piece.

[Pritesh]

i totally agree with your well rhymed lines...we have to be freed with evilness,dirtyness etc...nicely executed...heart touching piece of yours....really loved it....

[Pritesh]

Going to share this with my friends on facebook....

[Roy]

Thanks! :D

[Pritesh]

i totally agree with your well rhymed lines...we have to be freed with evilness,dirtyness etc...nicely executed...heart touching piece of yours....really loved it....

[Tasha]

Wow Roy this was beautiful and very powerful. I agree with everything you say here and I loved the rhyming as well. Keep it up!
~Tasha