Give In

A heart that's pounding,

A quivering hand,

Alone in the mind,

But you understand.

Trying to explain,

But words won't come out,

"I quit, I'm done",

I just want to shout.

But the look in your eye,

It means everything,

Your perfect smile,

It makes my heart sing.

Suddenly I'm safe,

This feeling without kin,

Baby, it's to you,

That I finally give in.

Reviews

[Asilem]

So sweet. :)

[ℰmerald ⚓]

This is really great, admitting that you've fallen under the spell of love. Lovely write.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Oh I love this, to surrender to love and give up the fight. Nicely written

[Pat Lynch]

I like it, but I think you could make a better image for the reader, maybe to make it more interesting, but good job!