Mute

         All the best words are written in pain

                  But still

                       Inside the palace of thousand words

                          Not a single coach...Touched the air

                              They are gonna stay closed for years... …

                              

                                                       

Reviews

[Arsh]

So.. it`s seemed you kept your cold heart ov`r my heart & allowed its warmth or coldness go enter my heart. Sounds good by me. So, here what a diff., unique, pleasurable, composition i've read through your verses! Yeah.. love's all that's belonged to pain and the pain`s about all that`s beloved by the heart... so, it's sure.. and obvious to get "written in pain" for.. the breath of "rain". Very heartfelt piece of your beautiful art!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you :)

[Saddam]

When words are not suggest you, your words they are silent, muted and non worth. It is very nice creation. I love it.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much SSADD for your kind view ! :)

[Lupus Kaos]

I loved these few but full of meaning words. It went straight to my library. Thanks for saying a huge truth in a small poem, especially within the line: "All the best words are written in pain".

[Lenah Mehzabin]

thank you so much frm the bottom of my heart .i m glad u liked it :)

[Vanesa Markovic]

I wish I had a knack for perfectly structured lines.
I'm never sure of the dynamics, haha.

This was well done, it felt as if the words themselves were blowing away as I read,
never to be seen again. Motivational!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much dear :) I'm glad u liked it ..

[anant mody]

niicccc linesss

but let yr words flyyy n create a little more

keep up god work:-):-)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you for your kind comment ..i appreciate but this poem is written as a Quatrain :)

[anant mody]

ccoollll

i noww u unspired me.to write quatrain

noww i.shall soon be uploading such quatrain:-):-)