Melody of Love

Love that dries in the fire of Autumn
In spring it's alive with Blossom of Roses
When in darken nights hearts are broken
Love is here.. so " Magical"
It can give strength to hold - Heal and transform pain
Into warm and delightful bond
With Sweet adventures for days

Childish demands

Silly laughters

Honey sweetened lovers

In every decades their melody touches

Spreads harmony in the Earth

Oh let me move - move round like dove

Around the scent of love

Oh I don’t mind �" mind to drown

Inside alone the light of love

So let me write �"write only “Love”

My pages should scream it loud

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Saddam]

So let me write "write only “Love”
My pages should scream it loud
Love that dries in the fire of Autumn
In spring it's alive with Blossom of Roses.

Magical write, this time is Basant, it calls spring, Very romantic and here are your poetry. Just fell in love.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! : ) I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

A magic of love behind all your words, a reader can certainly not faint away from the read. Your Melody of love really scream it out loud for the need of "LOVE" in life. Thanks for sharing such a melodious poem :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! it really was a nice comment .

[Nila M.]

I feel the autumn, the blossoming roses and carefree joy of experiencing that love unhindered. I really love all the allusions to nature and the earth, as I think sometimes our humanity is too disconnected from that. And I really appreciated the light, almost ethereal quality of it all. Thank you

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh Thank you so much ! I really appreciate your words : )

[Nila M.]

I appreciate your words! I'm finding so much to read and enjoy here :)

[Nila M.]

I love that an emotion can be one thing to someone, and something completely different to someone else. I like seeing the perspective others have of things I might see from a different angle.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Of course , love has different flavors and different eye on it . U can see it from many angles but all are pleasurable to heart . !

[Nila M.]

This is why I read, I find it very fulfilling to experience the perspective of others. You did a fantastic job of sharing the world and feelings expressed above. I think that's one of the best things you can achieve in sharing any kind of art, that someone else participated and felt an impression that you created. Thanks very much

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful gentle words and thoughts.
"Around the scent of love
Oh I don’t mind " mind to drown
Inside alone the light of love
So let me write "write only “Love”
Would be nice if we know only love and kindness. Could write words of joy and laughter only. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank You so much coyote for your kind words ! : )

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

Every line sets hearts and passions on fire burning in strength to warm up. Excellent...:)....

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much for visiting my poetry side and lending a kind review .I'm glad u liked it : )

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome muchly...:).....

[Lenah Mehzabin]

: ) pleasure

[Sami Khalil]

:)..........

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethi..]

You writing is screaming so loud about love that I can rather hear it than read it:)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh Thank you so much for u nice words dear. : )

[The StoryTeller]

I think that is so true. You could be feeling like the lowest person on Earth and yet Love can life us up so far. And it isn't rational, which I think you did pretty well by, "Childish demands, sweet laughters, honey sweetened lovers." And the thing is, you never forget how Love feels. :) Great job ReD, I think this is a really good poem.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you soo much ! I'm happy that u appreciate it and enjoyed my poem : ) !

[The StoryTeller]

Well, it's beautiful and captures the essence of what love does for you, or a part of it, perfectly. Why wouldn't I love it? :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

My pleasure : )

[The StoryTeller]

Great, keep writing. I plan to read all of your writing, after Anahat's, if I ever get there. I'm swamped between my own writing, school, read requests, etc. But I'll get there. :) Besides, I have all the time in the world.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

I'm gonna read urs too ! :)

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, you don't have to, I'm sure you have lots of others to read between your groups and friends and all. But if you want too. :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

No seriously i will at this moment i'm a bit busy .But i will read after i'm free : )

[The StoryTeller]

Mmmm k, sounds good. I'm busy too. xD I'm in creative writing right now doing stuff while replying to your and Anahat's comments, and while trying to put in more poetry. So I totally understand. :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Ya haha i 'm in same condition

[The StoryTeller]

lol isn't it fun having so many things to do? :p

[Cool Girl]

Very powerful emotions. Amazing job!!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you soo much ! :)))

[Cool Girl]

Welcome!!!!!

[armin]

fine poem lenah, I enjoyed the read. Nice choice of words.

armin. ...

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much armin :))

[Cassie Black]

Very powerful words, beautiful explanation

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you soo much ! :)