EverGreen

EverGreen

A Poem by Lenah Mehzabin

 

If I could swim alone 

In the garden of evergreen

I would have seat and think

My words with no noise

But a halcyon choice

In sound mild

With sweet dim

Just breath unsmoked rhythms

Embracing  heart

The only thing

I gladly love

And always will

Even in dim

No company indeed

The place I dream

Would be best to live

Scars becoming a history

So less for memory to consist

In a blink of eye

I can see

Me being a queen

Of time

Immortal

Covered with harmony

Sweet ..

 

© 2015 Lenah Mehzabin


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SKY
Sweet and a Evergreen read. You really play with words beautifully. keep writing :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear !
SKY

4 Years Ago

Welcome from Sky!
A sweet love poem. Valentine

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you ! : )
One of your best. In my library...:).................

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you liked it : )
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:).......
This sounds like Eden ReD. The final lines are so ethereal they almost wisp away on the screen. Class!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much ! So glad :)
I gladly love
And always will
Even in dim
No company indeed.

Evergreen, I must say. Too beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much ! I'm glad : ) )
Beautiful artwork and place described.
"If I could swim alone
In the garden of evergreen
I would have seat and think"
I love the forest. Best place to think and ponder. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Coyote. I'm so glad u liked it : )
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.
You words always make me think...and that is a good thing. This was yet another beautiful poem from you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!.It's a lot coming from you. i'm glad : )
Wow, I don't even know.... Some of those words I don't know (that's surprising XD) but overall, ReD, that sounded like ancient poetry, especially with how it continued and yet still rhymed, almost subtly. I really like it, and I'd swim there too, or at least just sit in a garden of evergreen. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

haha Thank You! well You made me happy by saying it looks like ancient poetry. They are usually very.. read more
The StoryTeller

6 Years Ago

Lol, well, I didn't say GOOD ancient poetry.... Jk, it wa good, and was classy. :)
This is excellent, the last few lines created such an impact, well done Red.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! I'm glad u liked it : )
Nice imagery, lenah you are quite talented.
Beautiful one.

armin. ..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much armin for such an honor !

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