PINK

My first acrostic poem requested by Afraa my dear friend .: )

Patience showers gold in time

Innate talent if it finds

Nations accretes weapons of mind

Keen strive lease to fight feeble of life.

 

Author's Note

Well sorry it's really short I think ;(

Reviews

[Afraa]

Red, do not be disappointed about this at all, you hear me? Mine too is pretty damn short and people still loved it. Sometimes it's the shortest pieces of work that are the most important. :)

This wonderful piece of yours is rather epic. I appreciate the simplicity, and the BIG meaning it has. Your rhyming scheme is absolutely beautiful. And I love your big pink words... reminds me of Victoria's Secret! Haha!

I want to thank you for your sweet description, which made me smile. Thank you dearest friend for participating!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh aW ! haha Thank you soo much .You are obviously one of my precious friend since from the first time i joined Cafe's site .Oh about Victorious secret LOL ! Afraa I'm rolling with laughter now. Well i chose pink as most of people avoid that ( girly) haha
You are welcome and THANKS again cheers :**

[Afraa]

You should know I am rather sensitive, so careful you don't make me melt too much inside! Haha!
read moreYou should know I am rather sensitive, so careful you don't make me melt too much inside! Haha!

You're very welcome, dearest friend.

[Afraa]

You're very welcome, dearest friend. :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Okey ! ;) no melting I want u to to be solid not liquid haha :D.
Well I will sure go throw your poetry pieces !!

[Afraa]

Hahaha cheesy! :D

Thank you. :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

It's rare now a days ;)

[Afraa]

Sorry, what is? Haha! O_e

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Cheesy people haha ok just said it ;)

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH I love Pink... Love Your Acrostic Poem. Love it :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! .So sweet :)

[R Smith]

its an interesting work and i have to agree with Afraa, the shortest pieces can be the best, four lines or eight lines can usually express your words perfectly, great writing, well done ReD :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much! : )

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well this is PINK!!!
beautiful write!!
loved it!!!
:)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! : ))

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!! :) :)

[ANTO]

Best things come in small packages Red - this is proof.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Haha thank you so much ! I'm glad u liked it : )

[ms. barrie]

very clever arcostic. one that leaves a profound
impact. very original as well since you took
imo the color pink, associated with soft, subtle
and gave it strength.

I agree with Afraa: don't apologize for this being too
short. for it still spoke volumes. for example mine,
I personally feel is too long lol ~ but to me
there are really no set rules when it come to
creativity (art.) - thank you for sharing! :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh Thank you so much !. I really loved your words. Glad that u appreciate it ! : ))

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome, ReD :)

[armin]

Patience showers gold in time
Loved that line. Short but wonderful piece of poetry.
Thanks for the RR.

armin. ..

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh thank you so much !! I'm glad you liked it : ))

[Matching Socks]

Awesome job!
Patience showers gold in time...
Wow, I wish I had written that.
Excellent,

[Matching Socks]

Oh yeah, it's short but big impact. :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! I'm glad you appreciate it : )

[DoormanDan]

It may be short,but its one heck of a good acrostic! It has a genuinely unique and lovely atmosphere to it. Its poems like this that I wish I could find more often! Great job! :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh thank you so much!.I 'm happy that you appreciate : )

[Cool Girl]

Absolutely beautiful!!! I haven't written mine yet, but I hope to soon:)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you sooo much !! I'm glad u liked it : )) Send me a RR too when u write urs .I would love to read that too !

[Cool Girl]

Okay, I will! You're welcome/)

[Cool Girl]

:) :) :) :)