PINK

PINK

A Poem by Lenah Mehzabin
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My first acrostic poem requested by Afraa my dear friend .: )

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Patience showers gold in time

Innate talent if it finds

Nations accretes weapons of mind

Keen strive lease to fight feeble of life.

 

© 2015 Lenah Mehzabin


Author's Note

Lenah Mehzabin
Well sorry it's really short I think ;(

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Red, do not be disappointed about this at all, you hear me? Mine too is pretty damn short and people still loved it. Sometimes it's the shortest pieces of work that are the most important. :)

This wonderful piece of yours is rather epic. I appreciate the simplicity, and the BIG meaning it has. Your rhyming scheme is absolutely beautiful. And I love your big pink words... reminds me of Victoria's Secret! Haha!

I want to thank you for your sweet description, which made me smile. Thank you dearest friend for participating!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

It's rare now a days ;)
Afraa

6 Years Ago

Sorry, what is? Haha! O_e
Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Cheesy people haha ok just said it ;)



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OH I love Pink... Love Your Acrostic Poem. Love it :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much ! .So sweet :)
its an interesting work and i have to agree with Afraa, the shortest pieces can be the best, four lines or eight lines can usually express your words perfectly, great writing, well done ReD :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much! : )
well this is PINK!!!
beautiful write!!
loved it!!!
:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much ! : ))
Pushkar Prabhat

6 Years Ago

you are welcome!!! :) :)
Best things come in small packages Red - this is proof.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Haha thank you so much ! I'm glad u liked it : )
very clever arcostic. one that leaves a profound
impact. very original as well since you took
imo the color pink, associated with soft, subtle
and gave it strength.

I agree with Afraa: don't apologize for this being too
short. for it still spoke volumes. for example mine,
I personally feel is too long lol ~ but to me
there are really no set rules when it come to
creativity (art.) - thank you for sharing! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Oh Thank you so much !. I really loved your words. Glad that u appreciate it ! : ))
ms. barrie

6 Years Ago

you're very welcome, ReD :)
Patience showers gold in time
Loved that line. Short but wonderful piece of poetry.
Thanks for the RR.

armin. ..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much !! I'm glad you liked it : ))
Awesome job!
Patience showers gold in time...
Wow, I wish I had written that.
Excellent,

Posted 6 Years Ago


Matching Socks

6 Years Ago

Oh yeah, it's short but big impact. :)
Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much ! I'm glad you appreciate it : )
Red, do not be disappointed about this at all, you hear me? Mine too is pretty damn short and people still loved it. Sometimes it's the shortest pieces of work that are the most important. :)

This wonderful piece of yours is rather epic. I appreciate the simplicity, and the BIG meaning it has. Your rhyming scheme is absolutely beautiful. And I love your big pink words... reminds me of Victoria's Secret! Haha!

I want to thank you for your sweet description, which made me smile. Thank you dearest friend for participating!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

It's rare now a days ;)
Afraa

6 Years Ago

Sorry, what is? Haha! O_e
Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Cheesy people haha ok just said it ;)
It may be short,but its one heck of a good acrostic! It has a genuinely unique and lovely atmosphere to it. Its poems like this that I wish I could find more often! Great job! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much!.I 'm happy that you appreciate : )
Absolutely beautiful!!! I haven't written mine yet, but I hope to soon:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you sooo much !! I'm glad u liked it : )) Send me a RR too when u write urs .I would love to r.. read more
Cool Girl

6 Years Ago

Okay, I will! You're welcome/)
Cool Girl

6 Years Ago

:) :) :) :)

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