Caramelized Love

Caramelized Love

A Poem by Lenah Mehzabin

          


Along the twist of caramel love

 

The claws of heart scratches every part

When delights are preserved in nights

Of moonlit ~

       Soft shivers accompanies

Curtains meant to fall

Hiding the wild fusions

 Witnessed by evil moans

Sweetened were  your bites

     All over my land

Known as skin

Just deepen with love

 

Swallowed lip - one that can’t lie

Enjoyed pleasurable kisses ~ so fine

 

You breathed me

And I breathed you

Our allure survived

In that whole magical night

They call it Valentine’s

But it's  mine

 ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 

 ReD (06/02/15)

 

           

© 2015 Lenah Mehzabin


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This is interesting... I'd love to know where this originated from in terms of why that last stanza was written the way it was. Captivating.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the read dear and well It has no story actually.. i wrote it for Valentine special last y.. read more
It has a very textural basis to it.. a landscape of love. The canvas of the body. The emotions of the heart.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

5 Years Ago

I appreciate.Thank you so much !
An eloquent and beautiful write up ...

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love this. I love your descriptions!! Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear !


Ah! to breathe love and understand thy
Language of thy heart of Love and it be your
every breath is such a beautiful thing indeed.


I loved these stanza's lines.



You breathed me

And I breathed you

Our allure survived

In that whole magical night

They call it Valentine’s

But it's mine




Thank your for sharing and stopping
by my page.



God bless. Benita

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much !! God bless you too : )
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

6 Years Ago

you're welcome.
The title alone was just too good I had to give this a read. I enjoyed these lines " You breathed me
And I breathed you
Our allure survived
In that whole magical night
They call it Valentine’s
But it's mine" this was the perfect resolution which the poem needed.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much.I appreciate n glad u liked it .
Caramel Love? Sounds nice.
But.. wha... what? Valentine? Hell .. what a garbage! Ah - But not exactly!

Anyway -
--- Yeah, kinda deep write. I`m sure, lovers would appreciate it with heart, no matter what. Valentine makes lovers full of smiles so, they`d really like this piece of yous. You write it with your beautiful heart. Keep it up!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

U don't need to review if u dont lyk it lol ;')
i lyk to write all kind of poem according to .. read more
Arsh

6 Years Ago

Sorry, but I "NEEDED" to write a review so I did. Any Problem? lol
Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

u r really interesting devil one ;]D
Beautiful poem for the days of love.
"You breathed me
And I breathed you
Our allure survived
In that whole magical night
They call it Valentine’s
But it's mine"
The above lines are a perfect Valentine wish and words for love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much ! I'm really glad that you liked it :))
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.
Haha, I loved this!!! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

: ) Thank you dear !
Cool Girl

6 Years Ago

You're welcome, girlfriend! XD
its actually a hilarious poem. I loved it ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

;)) Thank you ( I knew you will :D )

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