Miles of love

Dedicated to my LillyRose

Over the internet

Seperated by miles and miles

Yet my love for you travels far

Online

Seperated from each others sight

Yet my wanting for you travels far

In a chatroom

Seperated from each others grasp

Yet our love is strong enough to make up for every mile

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

My version
Online together,
Seperated by miles and inches,
Yet my love for you travels far and wide,
Online but so true and so real,
Seperated from each others sight,
Yet my wanting for you travels far,
In a chatroom we can be found,
Seperated from each others grasp we are,
Yet our love is strong enough to make up for every mile and every inch every part of any street and any block.


I am sorrry I happen to notice all you need is a little grammar try.
100/100 though! :)

[?]

I hear you, I can relate. Internet love is hard, especially knowing you may never ever meet except in the chat room.
Love makes the miles seem not so far.
This is nice, sweet and from your heart
I like that

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I likes it (:
Great Job

[just take a breath]

(: awe. ok, this is really sweet(: it kind of shows how far love can go and that you can make it happen in so many ways!

the only think could be fixed is the length, and i think you could add a little more detail too it :)

good, simple poem
-marissa

[Eternal.Dreamer]

So cute, I like it.

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

Great work!!

[Leanne Conway]

Awe. This is so sweet hon. :D

[Suicidal Teddybear]

i love this its so cute and determind what a relationship needs fight and passion to not let it go

[Cassiopia Summers]

Awe, this is sooo adorable. (: I Love LeaLea, she's like my Sis. (: Great poem.

[Sunny Skye]

I think is good and so true. A lot of people do fall in love with people online but again not all of them are what they seem.