What Do You Want?

What Do You Want?

A Poem by Shawn Killian
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Parents suck

"

Don't tell me what to do

I will never bow to your will

Don't tell me what to speak

I will never learn your language

Don't tell me what to wear

I will never walk the line of normality

Don't try to use me

I will never be a pawn on your chessboard

Don't try to abuse me

I will never be submissive

Why do you insist on being my puppeteer

What could you possibly want from me?

© 2011 Shawn Killian


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I love this, the power, the respect deserved


Posted 13 Years Ago


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wow so powerful
Tell it like it is Shawn, be your self and not what or how others want you to be.
Great job

Posted 13 Years Ago


I likenit alot it's wonderful :)
My favorite line would be
I will never walk the line of normality. Amen to that I hate norms the wierd to me lol :p
-abbie

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

but they mean good.:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 29, 2011
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Shawn Killian
Shawn Killian

Stroudsburg, PA



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I am a gloomy goth, alone in a world of wannabe's. I write dark depressing stories, listen to dark, depressing music, and am absorbed with Assassins Creed 3 I am eager to talk to fellow musicians.. more..

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