A Poem by Yuffi (hat)

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          I've been feeling odd lately.

          Somethings just not right.

          Evreything is spinning.

           And all my enemys are winning.

           The sun dosen't look yellow, it looks like a marshmellow.

           My face looks like a proon.

           There is no moon.


            I hope I will be healed soon.



             Weeks later they told me I was paranoid.






© 2009 Yuffi (hat)

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Yuffi     (hat)
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I'm not trying to be rude, and i hope you don't mind me saying this, but i don't really think this is good. It might just be because I'm not a fan of rhyming poetry, but I just don't know. It didn't make sense at all. Just because it rhymes doesn't mean it makes sense. I just though you might want to know.

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

...... its good but but you can barely read it..... some ppl can't read anything with colored writing.... it is good.. good style... but the colored text is alittle too much.....

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Yuffi     (hat)
Yuffi (hat)

Houma, LA

I like to read and write poetryMyHotComments Don't click here! my name is hat and my life is filled with adventure i have a dog cat and two fish. i love to go outside and explore the wood s in .. more..

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