Does this look emo to you ?

Kinda emo really

 

I feel like I want to cry
For I’m longing to die
It won’t be hard to say goodbye
This is me , just my life
Full of grief , full of strife
I need to end my life
So I cut my wrists with a knife
I feel so bad
I feel so sad
I’m suffering the pain
I can’t go through it again
I would rather be dead
So I would have nothing to dread
 

Reviews

[Elrebmik™]

Definetely emo, but still a wonderful poem. Great job!

[ebur™]

Yep, pretty sure this sounds emo, but still, this is a nice piece to read.

[Thomas B. Buckman]

Emo it is.
But it is still a good read.

[Manda]

awww this is so very sad. but a great piece =) great read! keep it up!