Does this look emo to you ?

Does this look emo to you ?

A Poem by Alelei

Kinda emo really



I feel like I want to cry
For I’m longing to die
It won’t be hard to say goodbye
This is me , just my life
Full of grief , full of strife
I need to end my life
So I cut my wrists with a knife
I feel so bad
I feel so sad
I’m suffering the pain
I can’t go through it again
I would rather be dead
So I would have nothing to dread

© 2009 Alelei

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Definetely emo, but still a wonderful poem. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Yep, pretty sure this sounds emo, but still, this is a nice piece to read.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Emo it is.
But it is still a good read.

Posted 14 Years Ago

awww this is so very sad. but a great piece =) great read! keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on November 14, 2009



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