I havent thought of a title yet (:

I havent thought of a title yet (:

A Poem by Alelei
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This is how I feel sometimes. And it sucks :(

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Living and breathing in regret
Thinking of what seems so far-fetched
For this silence, it's cut me deep
May I lay in bed and cry myself to sleep

My yelling and screaming, the louder I shout
This sorrow and hurt I try to block out
The painful truth and the deceiving lies
Makes me want to crawl up and die

© 2009 Alelei


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Alelei
Um this is what I have so far.
I'm not sure if I should make changes.

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A very moving piece on regret and anguish. I picture the second stanza being "screamed" in the harsh light of a bedside clock blinking 3:30 AM.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 24, 2009
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Alelei
Alelei

Auckland, New Zealand



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