Paradise Lost

Paradise Lost

A Poem by Light
"

love should, never feel small.

"


 


Yonder, I bare my heart

between the fine palms,

of Your serenity

my shades unfold,

where eternity moves

to the motions of

Your blossoming lips,

rising a kiss

to grip my sorrows.

 

You utter,

 Your empire falls

   over my closed eyes,   

and I inhale silence

the faintest stirs

of Your voice

simmering on my respiration,

yet, reserved in one breath

ascending in the reverie~

"Paradise lost".   

 

Bathed~ I am

under Your pondering eyes

brighter than the Sun

diviner of the Moon,

melting into,

Water on the pebbles

humming the Sound of,

"Love should,

       never feel small".   



©  Gh ~*

26.June.2018




 

© 2018 Light


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A poem, a prayer of absolute rapture and immersion in the beauty of love and life...I lose myself in the picture and in the inspired words. Lovely, lyrical verses with transcendent imagery “Bathed- I am under Your pondering eyes..brighter than the Sun..diviner of the Moon”- I am awestruck by these lines. This is a Master-Class poem my friend.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

I'm lost too, in Your beautiful words dear Annette, I read them again and again, and I don't know wh.. read more



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"You utter,
Your empire falls
over my closed eyes,
and I inhale silence"
is the gem set in the gold ... deep and carefully crafted says i! as one crying in the darkness so to speak ... with the most blessed of answering voice ..i want this set in me heart and mind .. to take me into the sunrise today .. well done Light ... a real treat to read and experience
E.

the faintest stirs

of Your voice

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

Thank You dear gentle Mr.E for reading this older piece and reviewing it with Your wonderful and sin.. read more
I m very fortunate to be part of this website because whenever I read your words , it feed the mind with beauty and refreshes my soul!! just cup of rhymes and emotions you pour ..lovely dear !! Always waiting to read you !!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

11 Months Ago

Such lovely and warming words You left me here to bless my heart with dear friend, thanking You for .. read more
Pooja Chintamani

11 Months Ago

You don't Know how precious is this for Young writer s , specially like mine where is blossoming ..
Light

11 Months Ago

and I'm sure You are blossoming sweetly, beautifully 🌺
Amazing use of words and thoughts. The words gentle but powerful for the emotion of love. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

Thank You my dear friend for Your very kind visit and sweet words, I'm really grateful.
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome my dear friend.
Your poetry transport us into the divine realm, seeing the glory of God, unlocking His divine secrets, ascending and descending between the seven heavens to be witnesses to His majesty. Keep us awestruck by both.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

in Your generous brilliant review You revealed my wish, to take my reader to another world, to let t.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome in every note to the notable.
Oh how your words have a way to warm the soul- the sound of love should never be small- alas the heart does not always speak to feel the truth and lacks much sound and can be a noisy chamber- only for selected to hear- may the melodies of loves lament serenade your hearts desires- comforted by each note in rising volumes 🌹

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

MISSED You dearest Kelly, my ever watery friend, the special and one of a kind being, THANK YOU for .. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Lots and lots of love and hugs being sent your way 🌹
You always find the right picture or music to go with your beautiful words. I think you have an extraordinary talent for expression. you are a true artist

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

You make my heart smiles with a blush of real deep gratitude, You are beyond kind my friend, thank Y.. read more
Loved the chosen musical accompanyment to this piece. Sends a message in a soothing and calming tone. Thanks for sharing this mood with us. Gh.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

Thank You dear Kitty, I'm glad You liked the music, the song inspired the note of my poem, "Love sho.. read more
kitty

1 Year Ago

Always a pleasure, my friend!
You just nailed it with these words dear Light ''Love should never feel small''... All the very best of everything...... Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

You are always generous to a fault, bless ya and keep shining my friend...... Neville
Light

1 Year Ago

ohhh! I'm smiling and shining right now! :)

Bless You too, dear Neville*
Neville

1 Year Ago

Good to hear.... N
You are like a "light in the darkness and the despair of this bitter and twisted world. With your profound felt beautiful inspirational poetry. That is so intoxicating and delightful to take on board and cherish and saviour, you make the darkness go and love, hope and inspiration take hold and comfort you close."

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

dear Dee, I really don't know what I should comment to Your gorgeous generosity, You left my heart o.. read more
Dawn

1 Year Ago

My pleasure because simply put its all true. YOU are a light that shines
Light

1 Year Ago

You are far too kind and do make me happily blush, thank YOU* the beautiful YOU🌟
A kiss to grip the sorrow... :)
Love that line .... you write so beautifully.... and with so much care... the readers are always transported to some other land....

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

:) You make my heart smiles with warmth with Your thoughtful sweet words dear Ardra, Thank You alway.. read more

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Added on June 25, 2018
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