Couplet~

Couplet~

A Poem by lightsong
"

the thin stream there.

"

 




~

Humbly,

my drops~ there~

immersed in the aura,

embraced by the shades.

deepening, flowing

I am no longer the breath,
I am the wonder honoring Earth

with greenish heavenscenes.

~

 

Thou~ my soul.

I prayed for poetry;

until my hands bled.

to know then, I am no more a part,

of human emotions.

 

Thou~ my soul.

write me over time,

where there is no verse,

but the olde sigh of Sol

lapping Aurora,

with extolled rhythms.

 

 

Couplet~

with the prime rhyme,

of Love kissing life

exhaling Laurels

tuning paradise.

where I don't need to exist,

I am the stream

deepening, flowing

 Him~



©  Gh~*

24.Oct.2018

© 2019 lightsong


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Where on earth did you just come from? There is nothing for me to say or add or ...you left me nothing. This is amazing work that is so original it gives worth to your name. I'm going to have to come back and immerse but this is absolutely original and stunning. Both of those words I hate to use in a review Btw..but you earned it here, Thank you for sharing this! And I might friend request just cause you said no and then threw this on the table so be prepared...hahaha. I'll respect but i will read..wonderful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

2 Years Ago

You've made my day :) maybe even more days to come :) You left me nothing to say here, Your honesty,.. read more
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2 Years Ago

thank You again for a deeply heartfelt and beautiful review. it's a real pleasure to became friends .. read more



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I felt the poet rising above the physical, transcending the physical realm and straddling svereal spiritual planes and surreal dimensions and that is the beauty of this poem.
The last verse, spoke to me of moving on and flowing with love rather than staying stagnant in love.
Very beautifully expressed, my friend.
May the wonders honoring the earth never cease!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Month Ago

Thank You so much dear AJ for finding this old piece, it's still one of my favourites, very special .. read more
AJNJ

1 Month Ago

Keep it, treasure it and make changes as you grow and evolve in spirit and in poetry...A special poe.. read more
lightsong

1 Month Ago

How true what You say :) as I grow in spirit and poerty, thank You warmly yet again ✨🌷✨
So beautifully expressed, love and miss your poems ;-] Amazing work.

Posted 9 Months Ago


This is just plain amazing....
wish i could write like this.

Posted 9 Months Ago


I prayed for poetry;
until my hands bled.

I too pray often that I be a poet. Yet never with such ardor and grace. Lovely poetry Light. You are a true poet at heart.

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

12 Months Ago

You are truly kind and generous to me dear Rania, You've warmed my heart with Your thoughtful and be.. read more
Rania

12 Months Ago

It’s my joy to have met you. I got lucky today. Welcome friend Light.
This is like taking a spiritual adventure through different parts and different seasons of your life. Evolving into a more spiritual being.

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

12 Months Ago

yes my friend it surely can be read like that :) Thank Yo so much for taking the time to read and le.. read more
Poetic Beauty

12 Months Ago

You are welcome. It was beautifully written
A simply compelling and spellbinding write my dear! I love this. ~Sharon

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Year Ago

it's a pleasure to receive this warm compliment. Thank You so much my lovely friend for stopping by .. read more
such a wonderful and beautiful imagery here, this is a lovely write

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Year Ago

You are so sweet to browse between my pages my friend, thank You so much for Your time and kindness,.. read more
The imagery, the flow...everything about this is enchanting. Beautifully written!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Year Ago

Thank You my friend for this sweet visit and words from You, they are much appreciated :)
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"I am no longer the breath,
I am the wonder honoring Earth"

Just beautiful thoughts my friend...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Year Ago

Thank You Stella for Your kind visit and thought of my poem, much appreciated 🌸🌸🌸
Stella Armour

1 Year Ago

my pleasure
Wow, this is just plain beautiful as well as well written. I really enjoyed this piece

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Year Ago

You are really kind to me my friend, Thank You so much for Your encouraging wonderful review 🌸�.. read more

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