Couplet~

the thin stream there.

 

~

Humbly,

my drops~ there~

immersed in the aura,

embraced by the shades.

deepening, flowing

I am no longer the breath,
I am the wonder honoring Earth

with greenish heavenscenes.

~

 

Thou~ my soul.

I prayed for poetry;

until my hands bled.

to know then, I am no more a part,

of human emotions.

 

Thou~ my soul.

write me over time,

where there is no verse,

but the olde sigh of sol

lapping aurora,

with extolled rhythms.

 

 

Couplet~

with the prime rhyme,

of love kissing life

exhaling laurel

tuning paradise.

where I don't need to exist,

I am the stream

deepening, flowing

 Him~

 

 

©  Gh~*

24.Oct.2018

Reviews

[shadrach hah]

Hi Gounwah, once more your creative juices flow and your words create the most beautiful images. Your words flow so easily down the written page. This is poetry at its best, an outstanding piece, my dear friend. I read and I feel a wave of great peace. Hugs....Mike.

[lightsong]

Hi again my friend Mike, and once again my deep gratitude for You taking the time to read with care and feelings my poems, it's early morning here and I have a busy day, will catch up with You later~ here wishing You a peaceful sleep and sweetest dreams ✨(as I believe it must be sleeping time for You now).

[no tell writer]

So very nicely written and so beautifully expressed,
you are very talented

[Kerra H.]

Very nicely written, enjoyed your couplet, beautiful

[lightsong]

Thank You Kerra for your kind words and visit, much appreciated~

[Kerra H.]

not a problem

[Orphic dreamer]

"with the prime rhyme,
of love kissing life
exhaling laurel
tuning paradise."
these lines are beyond the scopes of beauty. So delicately interwoven to create a majestic anecdote.
an absolutely breathtaking piece! from the vivid imagery to the fragile voice reciting it.

[lightsong]

and your review is beyond beautiful, wise and understanding my friend, a real pleasure to read and receive them. my very deepest gratitude for You and your brilliance❤️

[Pete]

amazing. overflowing with feeling. practically reads itself in another realm. so deep, one can hardly find their way back - not that anyone would. simply wonderful piece of verse - the epitome of poetry. unforgettable, leaves a lasting impression. bravo ... :)

[lightsong]

my sincerest gratitude for this gorgeous review dear Pete, I am for sure smiling and blushing :"> Thank You so much my fine friend, it's really wonderful to read your thoughts on my humble pages 💕

[Weeping willow]

So beautifully expressed, love and miss your poems ;-] Amazing work.

[Just Kim]

This is just plain amazing....
wish i could write like this.

[Rania M]

I prayed for poetry;
until my hands bled.

I too pray often that I be a poet. Yet never with such ardor and grace. Lovely poetry Light. You are a true poet at heart.

[lightsong]

You are truly kind and generous to me dear Rania, You've warmed my heart with Your thoughtful and beautiful words, Thank You 💐💐💐

[Rania M]

It’s my joy to have met you. I got lucky today. Welcome friend Light.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is like taking a spiritual adventure through different parts and different seasons of your life. Evolving into a more spiritual being.

[lightsong]

yes my friend it surely can be read like that :) Thank Yo so much for taking the time to read and leave Your wonderful thoughts here 🌸🌷🌸

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome. It was beautifully written