Couplet~

Couplet~

A Poem by lightsong
"

the thin stream there.

"

 




~

Humbly,

my drops~ there~

immersed in the aura,

embraced by the shades.

deepening, flowing

I am no longer the breath,
I am the wonder honoring Earth

with greenish heavenscenes.

~

 

Thou~ my soul.

I prayed for poetry;

until my hands bled.

to know then, I am no more a part,

of human emotions.

 

Thou~ my soul.

write me over time,

where there is no verse,

but the olde sigh of sol

lapping aurora,

with extolled rhythms.

 

 

Couplet~

with the prime rhyme,

of love kissing life

exhaling laurel

tuning paradise.

where I don't need to exist,

I am the stream

deepening, flowing

 Him~

 

 

©  Gh~*

24.Oct.2018

© 2021 lightsong


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Hi Gounwah, once more your creative juices flow and your words create the most beautiful images. Your words flow so easily down the written page. This is poetry at its best, an outstanding piece, my dear friend. I read and I feel a wave of great peace. Hugs....Mike.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

3 Weeks Ago

Hi again my friend Mike, and once again my deep gratitude for You taking the time to read with care .. read more



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Hi Gounwah, once more your creative juices flow and your words create the most beautiful images. Your words flow so easily down the written page. This is poetry at its best, an outstanding piece, my dear friend. I read and I feel a wave of great peace. Hugs....Mike.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

3 Weeks Ago

Hi again my friend Mike, and once again my deep gratitude for You taking the time to read with care .. read more
So very nicely written and so beautifully expressed,
you are very talented

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely written, enjoyed your couplet, beautiful

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

2 Months Ago

Thank You Kerra for your kind words and visit, much appreciated~
Kerra H.

2 Months Ago

not a problem
"with the prime rhyme,
of love kissing life
exhaling laurel
tuning paradise."
these lines are beyond the scopes of beauty. So delicately interwoven to create a majestic anecdote.
an absolutely breathtaking piece! from the vivid imagery to the fragile voice reciting it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

2 Months Ago

and your review is beyond beautiful, wise and understanding my friend, a real pleasure to read and r.. read more
amazing. overflowing with feeling. practically reads itself in another realm. so deep, one can hardly find their way back - not that anyone would. simply wonderful piece of verse - the epitome of poetry. unforgettable, leaves a lasting impression. bravo ... :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

5 Months Ago

my sincerest gratitude for this gorgeous review dear Pete, I am for sure smiling and blushing :"> Th.. read more
So beautifully expressed, love and miss your poems ;-] Amazing work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is just plain amazing....
wish i could write like this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I prayed for poetry;
until my hands bled.

I too pray often that I be a poet. Yet never with such ardor and grace. Lovely poetry Light. You are a true poet at heart.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Year Ago

You are truly kind and generous to me dear Rania, You've warmed my heart with Your thoughtful and be.. read more
Rania M

1 Year Ago

It’s my joy to have met you. I got lucky today. Welcome friend Light.
This is like taking a spiritual adventure through different parts and different seasons of your life. Evolving into a more spiritual being.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Year Ago

yes my friend it surely can be read like that :) Thank Yo so much for taking the time to read and le.. read more
Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

You are welcome. It was beautifully written

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