Couplet~

the thin stream there.

 

~

Humbly,

my drops~ there~

immersed in the aura,

embraced by the shades.

deepening, flowing

I am no longer the breath,
I am the wonder honoring Earth

with greenish heavenscenes.

~

 

Thou~ my soul.

I prayed for poetry;

until my hands bled.

to know then, I am no more a part,

of human emotions.

 

Thou~ my soul.

write me over time,

where there is no verse,

but the olde sigh of Sol

lapping Aurora,

with extolled rhythms.

 

 

Couplet~

with the prime rhyme,

of Love kissing life

exhaling Laurels

tuning paradise.

where I don't need to exist,

I am the stream

deepening, flowing

 Him~

©  Gh~*

24.Oct.2018

Reviews

[Perdition]

Where on earth did you just come from? There is nothing for me to say or add or ...you left me nothing. This is amazing work that is so original it gives worth to your name. I'm going to have to come back and immerse but this is absolutely original and stunning. Both of those words I hate to use in a review Btw..but you earned it here, Thank you for sharing this! And I might friend request just cause you said no and then threw this on the table so be prepared...hahaha. I'll respect but i will read..wonderful.

[Light]

You've made my day :) maybe even more days to come :) You left me nothing to say here, Your honesty, Your praises mean even more since I wasn't being able to write any word for quite sometime, and this is what I ended up with, and though my style seems can't change but I'm happy that at least I came up with this.

I came from a private land, a land that is my "private world" :)

Thank You my friend, with my sincere gratitude*

[Light]

thank You again for a deeply heartfelt and beautiful review. it's a real pleasure to became friends with You*

[sonnie ibadah]

The imagery, the flow...everything about this is enchanting. Beautifully written!

[Light]

Thank You my friend for this sweet visit and words from You, they are much appreciated :)
read moreThank You my friend for this sweet visit and words from You, they are much appreciated :)

Happy Weekend 🌸🌸🌸

[Stella Armour]

"I am no longer the breath,
I am the wonder honoring Earth"

Just beautiful thoughts my friend...

[Light]

Thank You Stella for Your kind visit and thought of my poem, much appreciated 🌸🌸🌸

[Stella Armour]

my pleasure

[Kesch]

Wow, this is just plain beautiful as well as well written. I really enjoyed this piece

[Light]

You are really kind to me my friend, Thank You so much for Your encouraging wonderful review 🌸🌸🌸

[Lydia]

Magical spiritual and just plain wonderful writing. So calm and peaceful. Almost like a psalm. You are at one with nature and with your spirituality. Just beautiful. Lydi**

[Light]

I think You said it all, one with nature and one with spirituality :) Thank You Lydi** for Your amazing and beautiful review, I'm both humbled and pleased ✨😊✨

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

O! … the last four lines of this are just brilliant. While form and content from beginning to end are important, it's always the summation that can really make or break a poem. This is beautiful!

[Light]

Thank You dear Linda for Your kindness here, and I completely agree with You, I always try to make a powerful ending and also a good beginning, the title and the start always what make the reader keeps going on or not, and the end just as You say what makes the poem a "poem" or not :) glad that You shared Your thoughts with me and that we share the same of them. Thank You again for stopping by 🌸🌸🌸

[B]

This found bond
beyond the ticking time
Entwined with all that is natural
and pure

You took me to another world with your words
Very Beautiful !

[Light]

I love Your verse very much, You should use it in a new poem, I know You can create a beautiful piece from it.

Thanking You kindly for Your read and Your sincere feelings my friend, it pleases me greatly to take my reader to another place out of this world, Thank You again 🌸🌸🌸

[Wondering Mind]

Beautiful, eloquent expressions and heavenly imagery. Just lovely!

[Light]

how lovely to hear these words, thank You my friend for taking the time to read my poem and for Your wonderful visit, I appreciate it a lot.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this reinforces the idea that Melanie had when she sang this song that said..."i am not a poet, living is the poem"
"i have a tearful language that translates what i am"----
your writing moves me, light.
I wish i could write like this.
j.

[Light]

Your sincere and heartwarming words mean a lot my friend, You make me feel both humbled and so pleased. I shall look and listen to that song as soon as I can :)

[hello there]

your words have a spell on me. every syllable is so enriching and i can't help but feel enchanted the more i read. your sentence fluency is amazing; flows smoothly. i'm really amazed. you have a lot of talent and i feel blessed to have read this. have a nice day!

[Light]

How very kind of You my friend, Your words warm my heart with happiness, I'm both humbled and blessed to receive them, my deepest gratitude for Your beautiful visit.