Couplet~

the thin stream there.

 

~

Humbly,

my drops~ there~

immersed in the aura,

embraced by the shades.

deepening, flowing

I am no longer the breath,
I am the wonder honoring Earth

with greenish heavenscenes.

~

 

Thou~ my soul.

I prayed for poetry;

until my hands bled.

to know then, I am no more a part,

of human emotions.

 

Thou~ my soul.

write me over time,

where there is no verse,

but the olde sigh of Sol

lapping Aurora,

with extolled rhythms.

 

 

Couplet~

with the prime rhyme,

of Love kissing life

exhaling Laurels

tuning paradise.

where I don't need to exist,

I am the stream

deepening, flowing

 Him~

©  Gh~*

24.Oct.2018

Reviews

[Perdition]

Where on earth did you just come from? There is nothing for me to say or add or ...you left me nothing. This is amazing work that is so original it gives worth to your name. I'm going to have to come back and immerse but this is absolutely original and stunning. Both of those words I hate to use in a review Btw..but you earned it here, Thank you for sharing this! And I might friend request just cause you said no and then threw this on the table so be prepared...hahaha. I'll respect but i will read..wonderful.

[lightsong]

You've made my day :) maybe even more days to come :) You left me nothing to say here, Your honesty, Your praises mean even more since I wasn't being able to write any word for quite sometime, and this is what I ended up with, and though my style seems can't change but I'm happy that at least I came up with this.

I came from a private land, a land that is my "private world" :)

Thank You my friend, with my sincere gratitude*

[lightsong]

thank You again for a deeply heartfelt and beautiful review. it's a real pleasure to became friends with You*

[AJNJ]

I felt the poet rising above the physical, transcending the physical realm and straddling svereal spiritual planes and surreal dimensions and that is the beauty of this poem.
The last verse, spoke to me of moving on and flowing with love rather than staying stagnant in love.
Very beautifully expressed, my friend.
May the wonders honoring the earth never cease!

[lightsong]

Thank You so much dear AJ for finding this old piece, it's still one of my favourites, very special to me and close to my heart, I still remember the day when I wrote it, I was for sure somewhere else not here lol, when I posted it I was still wanting to make changes (honestly till now too) and I was both surprised and humble receiving all the beautiful appreciations I got, somehow I wrote one of my bests :)

as You tell me, thanks a ton and tones for Your brilliant take on my poem, so grateful for your kindness 💕

[AJNJ]

Keep it, treasure it and make changes as you grow and evolve in spirit and in poetry...A special poem indeed. You are most welcome, dear Light!

[lightsong]

How true what You say :) as I grow in spirit and poerty, thank You warmly yet again ✨🌷✨

[Weeping willow]

So beautifully expressed, love and miss your poems ;-] Amazing work.

[Just Kim]

This is just plain amazing....
wish i could write like this.

[Rania]

I prayed for poetry;
until my hands bled.

I too pray often that I be a poet. Yet never with such ardor and grace. Lovely poetry Light. You are a true poet at heart.

[lightsong]

You are truly kind and generous to me dear Rania, You've warmed my heart with Your thoughtful and beautiful words, Thank You 💐💐💐

[Rania]

It’s my joy to have met you. I got lucky today. Welcome friend Light.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is like taking a spiritual adventure through different parts and different seasons of your life. Evolving into a more spiritual being.

[lightsong]

yes my friend it surely can be read like that :) Thank Yo so much for taking the time to read and leave Your wonderful thoughts here 🌸🌷🌸

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome. It was beautifully written

[Miss Sharon]

A simply compelling and spellbinding write my dear! I love this. ~Sharon

[lightsong]

it's a pleasure to receive this warm compliment. Thank You so much my lovely friend for stopping by and for leaving Your sweet touch. much appreciated 🌷

[Kari (Mousey)]

such a wonderful and beautiful imagery here, this is a lovely write

[lightsong]

You are so sweet to browse between my pages my friend, thank You so much for Your time and kindness, I appreciate it a lot.

[sonnie ibadah]

The imagery, the flow...everything about this is enchanting. Beautifully written!

[lightsong]

Thank You my friend for this sweet visit and words from You, they are much appreciated :)
read moreThank You my friend for this sweet visit and words from You, they are much appreciated :)

Happy Weekend 🌸🌸🌸

[Stella Armour]

"I am no longer the breath,
I am the wonder honoring Earth"

Just beautiful thoughts my friend...

[lightsong]

Thank You Stella for Your kind visit and thought of my poem, much appreciated 🌸🌸🌸

[Stella Armour]

my pleasure

[Kesch]

Wow, this is just plain beautiful as well as well written. I really enjoyed this piece

[lightsong]

You are really kind to me my friend, Thank You so much for Your encouraging wonderful review 🌸🌸🌸