Couplet~

Couplet~

A Poem by lightsong
"

the thin stream there.

"

 




~

Humbly,

my drops~ there~

immersed in the aura,

embraced by the shades.

deepening, flowing

I am no longer the breath,
I am the wonder honoring Earth

with greenish heavenscenes.

~

 

Thou~ my soul.

I prayed for poetry;

until my hands bled.

to know then, I am no more a part,

of human emotions.

 

Thou~ my soul.

write me over time,

where there is no verse,

but the olde sigh of sol

lapping aurora,

with extolled rhythms.

 

 

Couplet~

with the prime rhyme,

of love kissing life

exhaling laurel

tuning paradise.

where I don't need to exist,

I am the stream

deepening, flowing

 Him~

 

 

©  Gh~*

24.Oct.2018

© 2021 lightsong


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This has a beauty flowing through it that is clear yet surrounded in mist, like a magnificent waterfall from high on a hill. The spirit can blossom from such scenery, such contingent greenery offered by our muse or random inspiration. I thoroughly enjoyed the read, Lightsong. F.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

3 Weeks Ago

Many apologizes for my delay in replying to your very beautiful, tender and thoughtful words my frie.. read more



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This has a beauty flowing through it that is clear yet surrounded in mist, like a magnificent waterfall from high on a hill. The spirit can blossom from such scenery, such contingent greenery offered by our muse or random inspiration. I thoroughly enjoyed the read, Lightsong. F.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

3 Weeks Ago

Many apologizes for my delay in replying to your very beautiful, tender and thoughtful words my frie.. read more
This poem paints a delicate image of nature's gifts, a waterfall, a stream of water, crafted by your beautiful stream of words. Nicely done!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

5 Months Ago

Thank You so much for your beautiful words my friend, I am grateful for your time and kindness, I wi.. read more
Aura

5 Months Ago

The pleasure is all mine!
lightsong

5 Months Ago

Awa! You are so kind :> Thank You💗
I wonder sometimes if we as poets, seek that which is perfect in our art, complete that one piece that is perfect before God, after our prayer is answered, leave it all content? I ask this thinking on the stanza that you wrote about praying for poetry until your hands bled. I don't believe that was where you were going, but that is where I went. I think that your thought stream form the first word to the last was dynamic. What would it be like if we didn't exist as human but existed continuous spiritual poetry?

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

6 Months Ago

You went somewhere same as mine. When You have so much inside You, overwhelming feelings flowing, kn.. read more
another very impressive offering
a very enviable gift, and you have included a spectacular portrait of a portion of nature, also at its finest

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

6 Months Ago

and another Sweet gift from Mr. Dave :> thank You for reading and enjoying my poem. You honor me �.. read more
Good morning,
Lovely poem...always enjoy reading your words..especially over a cappuccino in the morning ...
I love the use of nature in your poems..that combined with your embracing thoughts always makes your poems a delight to read.
Lisa, 8am in Spain


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

6 Months Ago

Good Happy Day Lovely Lisa 💖

Another kind sweet gift from You to delight my day :>.. read more
Lisasview

6 Months Ago

You are so very welcome dear one,
Lisa, sun, still up in Spain 7:30pm
lightsong

6 Months Ago

Evening here 9:08 pm. Tired and sleepy... I hope your evening is beautiful like You 💖
Very light and surreal, beautiful arrangement and imagery well done!!!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

9 Months Ago

and Thank You so much for the wonderful kind words dear Patricia, may your day be so beautiful too�.. read more
Breathtaking words and that had such a beautiful flow! I love it!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

9 Months Ago

Thank You sweet friend for the sweet words and kind read :> sending sweet flowers in rerun🌸🌸�.. read more
KATHY SUE SILLS

9 Months Ago

You are welcome!You are welcome!
Deep thoughts. Praying till poetic hands bleed! Your words are drops of eloquence raining on my brain. Drips I lap up before they evaporate in the sigh of Sol. Verbal paradise tuned. You are the tuning fork of song and light!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

9 Months Ago

and You just wrote an amazing little poem here, did You know that? Thank You Bill for your beautiful.. read more
William Michael Reeves

9 Months Ago

I am aware when I write these reviews. Funny you should mention that. My next post is going to be a .. read more
lightsong

9 Months Ago

and here it comes, another journey of Billigami ;>
Like the river flowing, each verse different, but all the same poem. Images of a heart and soul at one with Nature. The Divine found in those places nobody else is looking. These are the thoughts engendered by this poem. And most beautiful thoughts they are, like the poem that inspired them. Well done, my friend.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

9 Months Ago

I love it when a reader feels it and got it in his/her own way, and You certainly did my friend. Tha.. read more
M. J. Smith

9 Months Ago

You are most welcome, my friend.
There’s a such a feeling of tranquility within your words Lightsong. A very enjoyable read.

Lathen

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

10 Months Ago

many thanks dear Lathen for your sweet words and kind visit, I appreciate it so much :>

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