Couplet~

the thin stream there.

 

~

Humbly,

my drops~ there~

immersed in the aura,

embraced by the shades.

deepening, flowing

I am no longer the breath,
I am the wonder honoring Earth

with greenish heavenscenes.

~

 

Thou~ my soul.

I prayed for poetry;

until my hands bled.

to know then, I am no more a part,

of human emotions.

 

Thou~ my soul.

write me over time,

where there is no verse,

but the olde sigh of sol

lapping aurora,

with extolled rhythms.

 

 

Couplet~

with the prime rhyme,

of love kissing life

exhaling laurel

tuning paradise.

where I don't need to exist,

I am the stream

deepening, flowing

 Him~

 

 

©  Gh~*

24.Oct.2018

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This has a beauty flowing through it that is clear yet surrounded in mist, like a magnificent waterfall from high on a hill. The spirit can blossom from such scenery, such contingent greenery offered by our muse or random inspiration. I thoroughly enjoyed the read, Lightsong. F.

[lightsong]

Many apologizes for my delay in replying to your very beautiful, tender and thoughtful words my friend. my sincerest gratitude for You, Fabian*

[Aura]

This poem paints a delicate image of nature's gifts, a waterfall, a stream of water, crafted by your beautiful stream of words. Nicely done!

[lightsong]

Thank You so much for your beautiful words my friend, I am grateful for your time and kindness, I will be returning the favor soon ~

[Aura]

The pleasure is all mine!

[lightsong]

Awa! You are so kind :> Thank You💗

[CD Campbell]

I wonder sometimes if we as poets, seek that which is perfect in our art, complete that one piece that is perfect before God, after our prayer is answered, leave it all content? I ask this thinking on the stanza that you wrote about praying for poetry until your hands bled. I don't believe that was where you were going, but that is where I went. I think that your thought stream form the first word to the last was dynamic. What would it be like if we didn't exist as human but existed continuous spiritual poetry?

[lightsong]

You went somewhere same as mine. When You have so much inside You, overwhelming feelings flowing, knowing it can't be expressed exactly, nor anything can be enough or satisfying, simple line as (I prayed poetry until my hands bled) say it better than any expression. I still remember when I wrote this, it's one of my special. When I posted it I never expected to receive such appreciation. It turned out to be one of my famous.

Thank You for reading with care and feeling CD. Always appreciate your time and kindness.

[Elder-Lee]

another very impressive offering
a very enviable gift, and you have included a spectacular portrait of a portion of nature, also at its finest

[lightsong]

and another Sweet gift from Mr. Dave :> thank You for reading and enjoying my poem. You honor me 💖

[Lisasview]

Good morning,
Lovely poem...always enjoy reading your words..especially over a cappuccino in the morning ...
I love the use of nature in your poems..that combined with your embracing thoughts always makes your poems a delight to read.
Lisa, 8am in Spain

[lightsong]

Good Happy Day Lovely Lisa 💖

Another kind sweet gift from You to delight my day :> Thank You so much for your continuing support and generosity ✨💖✨

[Lisasview]

You are so very welcome dear one,
Lisa, sun, still up in Spain 7:30pm

[lightsong]

Evening here 9:08 pm. Tired and sleepy... I hope your evening is beautiful like You 💖

[Patricia]

Very light and surreal, beautiful arrangement and imagery well done!!!

[lightsong]

and Thank You so much for the wonderful kind words dear Patricia, may your day be so beautiful too✨ 🌸

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Breathtaking words and that had such a beautiful flow! I love it!

[lightsong]

Thank You sweet friend for the sweet words and kind read :> sending sweet flowers in rerun🌸🌸🌸

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You are welcome!You are welcome!

[William Michael Reeves]

Deep thoughts. Praying till poetic hands bleed! Your words are drops of eloquence raining on my brain. Drips I lap up before they evaporate in the sigh of Sol. Verbal paradise tuned. You are the tuning fork of song and light!

[lightsong]

and You just wrote an amazing little poem here, did You know that? Thank You Bill for your beautiful praise and appreciation, and WAIT for me on your pages!

[William Michael Reeves]

I am aware when I write these reviews. Funny you should mention that. My next post is going to be a collection of them. But it requires something to inspire and that you do!

[lightsong]

and here it comes, another journey of Billigami ;>

[M. J. Smith]

Like the river flowing, each verse different, but all the same poem. Images of a heart and soul at one with Nature. The Divine found in those places nobody else is looking. These are the thoughts engendered by this poem. And most beautiful thoughts they are, like the poem that inspired them. Well done, my friend.

[lightsong]

I love it when a reader feels it and got it in his/her own way, and You certainly did my friend. Thank You so much for walking and flowing the journey with me through my poem. may your days be peaceful and joyous~

[M. J. Smith]

You are most welcome, my friend.

[Lathen Griffiths]

There’s a such a feeling of tranquility within your words Lightsong. A very enjoyable read.

Lathen

[lightsong]

many thanks dear Lathen for your sweet words and kind visit, I appreciate it so much :>