Couplet~

Couplet~

A Poem by Light
"

the thin stream there.

"

 




~

Humbly,

my drops~ there~

immersed in the aura,

embraced by the shades.

deepening, flowing

I am no longer the breath,
I am the wonder honoring Earth

with greenish heavenscenes.

~

 

Thou~ my soul.

I prayed for poetry;

until my hands bled.

to know then, I am no more a part,

of human emotions.

 

Thou~ my soul.

write me over time,

where there is no verse,

but the olde sigh of Sol

lapping Aurora,

with extolled rhythms.

 

 

Couplet~

with the prime rhyme,

of Love kissing life

exhaling Laurels

tuning paradise.

where I don't need to exist,

I am the stream

deepening, flowing

 Him~



©  Gh~*

24.Oct.2018

© 2019 Light


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Where on earth did you just come from? There is nothing for me to say or add or ...you left me nothing. This is amazing work that is so original it gives worth to your name. I'm going to have to come back and immerse but this is absolutely original and stunning. Both of those words I hate to use in a review Btw..but you earned it here, Thank you for sharing this! And I might friend request just cause you said no and then threw this on the table so be prepared...hahaha. I'll respect but i will read..wonderful.

Posted 11 Months Ago


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11 Months Ago

You've made my day :) maybe even more days to come :) You left me nothing to say here, Your honesty,.. read more
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thank You again for a deeply heartfelt and beautiful review. it's a real pleasure to became friends .. read more



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Wow, this is just plain beautiful as well as well written. I really enjoyed this piece

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2 Weeks Ago

You are really kind to me my friend, Thank You so much for Your encouraging wonderful review 🌸.. read more
Magical spiritual and just plain wonderful writing. So calm and peaceful. Almost like a psalm. You are at one with nature and with your spirituality. Just beautiful. Lydi**

Posted 1 Month Ago


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1 Month Ago

I think You said it all, one with nature and one with spirituality :) Thank You Lydi** for Your amaz.. read more
O! … the last four lines of this are just brilliant. While form and content from beginning to end are important, it's always the summation that can really make or break a poem. This is beautiful!

Posted 1 Month Ago


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1 Month Ago

Thank You dear Linda for Your kindness here, and I completely agree with You, I always try to make a.. read more
This found bond
beyond the ticking time
Entwined with all that is natural
and pure

You took me to another world with your words
Very Beautiful !

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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2 Months Ago

I love Your verse very much, You should use it in a new poem, I know You can create a beautiful piec.. read more
Beautiful, eloquent expressions and heavenly imagery. Just lovely!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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2 Months Ago

how lovely to hear these words, thank You my friend for taking the time to read my poem and for Your.. read more
this reinforces the idea that Melanie had when she sang this song that said..."i am not a poet, living is the poem"
"i have a tearful language that translates what i am"----
your writing moves me, light.
I wish i could write like this.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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2 Months Ago

Your sincere and heartwarming words mean a lot my friend, You make me feel both humbled and so pleas.. read more
your words have a spell on me. every syllable is so enriching and i can't help but feel enchanted the more i read. your sentence fluency is amazing; flows smoothly. i'm really amazed. you have a lot of talent and i feel blessed to have read this. have a nice day!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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2 Months Ago

How very kind of You my friend, Your words warm my heart with happiness, I'm both humbled and blesse.. read more
Unique and flowing, such an enjoyable and enriching read.
I'm glad I stopped by tonight as I feel I've seen something I won't again and I feel I need to know how you got such powerful writing and spiritual energy onto the page.

-In short, I love it! Lol.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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3 Months Ago

Hi again my new friend :)

I'm more glad than You are to have You stopped by my page a.. read more
I love this piece of excellence. Really well written and polished. Truly special poem. Well Done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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3 Months Ago

I'm pleased that You find this poem special, because for me it's truly special :) Your praise and be.. read more

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