ORKIDEA~

ORKIDEA~

A Poem by Light
"

the legend

"

 




You've shredded me, my land.

 

my muted oblations, let it all be

deaden within me. 

 

my body, pathway to heaven.

my soul, the purgatory.

 

You've wounded me, my love~

 

give in to lifespan, 
giving me up. 

 

let love speaks,

let love flows,

let love rules,  

 

and ...

 

remember me,

The Orchid

Your ancient virility.

Your rare divinity.

the everlasting~

when there is nothing left

no life or war,

only harmony and love.

 

©  Gh~*

9.Nov.2018
 


© 2019 Light


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Wonderful and needed words dear Poet.
"remember me,
The Orchid
Your ancient virility.
Your rare divinity.
the everlasting~
when there is nothing left
no life or war,
only harmony and love. "
I love the above lines. We need for the doves of peace to fly to the four corners of our world and the orchid to bloom in every land. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

11 Months Ago

may it be my dear loving friend, may it be...

Thank You for Your thoughtful and wond.. read more
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

Was my blessing dear friend and you are welcome.



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oh my, so sorry for the pain you placed in these lines so well that it is impossible not to empathize with the expression. I may be way off base but this almost seems like your speaking of a higher connection or idea severed and not so much that of an individual but as i am the consummate idealist (flaw be damned) i enjoy your closing line of hope:) an evocative expression in these lines Light.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

You are not way or even out of the base dear Bunny, but instead inside and within that base, this wa.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Months Ago

thanks... I was bored and alone in my workshop for too long and started playing with random mannequi.. read more
Light

4 Months Ago

hhaa You brought a BIG smile to my face dear Bunny, Thank You :D
Even in pain, you leave such a message of endurance and hope here, dear Light. There is pain on earth, yet there is also a lot to overcome it with, there’s beauty, harmony and love. The orchid symbolises them. Written in a beautifully sorrowful spirit. Appreciated a lot!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

11 Months Ago

Yes my friend I was wounded and sorrowful when I wrote this, glad to see You finding something posit.. read more
DIVYA

11 Months Ago

You created a thing of beauty from your pain. Not something everyone can do. You deserve all the app.. read more
Light

11 Months Ago

Thank You, so much 🌼🌸🌼🌸🌼
i think this is deeply spiritual ...a shattering ... difficult to handle such pain .. the second couplet turns things upside down in most spiritual thought ... it has the body as heaven and the soul as purgatory ... as an orchid, however, easy to imagine one would have that sensibility ;)
then ...even an orchid must die ..and in that surrender we are left with truth ... love and harmony ...deep thought provoking poem for me Light!
E.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

11 Months Ago

You are always sensible, sensitive and You feel when You read, that's why I will always love reading.. read more
Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

well...thank you...glad we have met and happy to read what you share Light :)
The last stanza juxtaposed with fhis music..you've taught me a DJ today and a Finnish one at that. More importantly you've written what the sound of pain is for you and now it is the sound of pain for me as well. Beautiful education and I am teared by that last stanza...just remarkable Light. Thank you for this.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perdition

11 Months Ago

As you wish..but realize when you put your art out for me or others to read and review..we are going.. read more
Light

11 Months Ago

You misunderstand me here, I meant I don't want You or anyone else to have the same pain I was feeli.. read more
Perdition

11 Months Ago

NO...I got that. This is poetry and beautiful poetry. Don't apologize for my passions ..lol. I under.. read more
A wonderful thought, I wish I could make that so. The comparison to an Orchid is beautiful and delicate. You make it seem effortless. Loved it!!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

11 Months Ago

awa! thank You dear Crowley, I own You a lot for Your very kind and wonderful reviews, so happy to k.. read more
Beautifully expressed my dear friend. I feel your emotions. The musical accompanyment adds to the sentimentality of the peace and one can be right there with you. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

11 Months Ago

can't thank You enough dearest Kitty not only for taking the time to read my humble poem, but to lis.. read more
kitty

11 Months Ago

My pleasure, as always!
Wonderfully expressed ;-]

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

11 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for the read and kind review.
A wonderful poem of love dear Light. Some very beautiful lines to match the exquisite image you have posted. Such an uplifting piece of poetry to delight your readers. Thanking you so much. All good wishes. Peace and love.

Chris

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

11 Months Ago

if You say so dear Chris, then the least I can be is to be a little happy :)

thanking.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

11 Months Ago

Blessings on you and thanks for your love. There is so much destruction, give thanks for what we do .. read more
Light

11 Months Ago

Bless You my dear, for the gentle caress Your words have bestowed upon my heart.
Wonderful and needed words dear Poet.
"remember me,
The Orchid
Your ancient virility.
Your rare divinity.
the everlasting~
when there is nothing left
no life or war,
only harmony and love. "
I love the above lines. We need for the doves of peace to fly to the four corners of our world and the orchid to bloom in every land. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

11 Months Ago

may it be my dear loving friend, may it be...

Thank You for Your thoughtful and wond.. read more
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

Was my blessing dear friend and you are welcome.
these words sound good in my head... they look good on the page.. as pretty as the picture and as rare as that blue butterfly hiding in the folds of that blue orchid up there.... N

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Months Ago

you maybe just need to keep looking....hey and dont you worry like that.. okay x
Light

11 Months Ago

:') my eyes have been blurry lately... I will try not to worry :")
Neville

11 Months Ago

keep smiling :)

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