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the keeper

the keeper

A Poem by Light
"

the giver, the seer, the keeper.

"


arling,D

 

Your fairness like freedom

beautifies and falls,

with the sounds

of waterfalls stirring the way up

to heavens.

 

Your warmth dwells,

when there is no You

to wrap my body, my heart

in the essence of my soul

bonding with Thou~

inundating as a river.  

~

I've been the Keeper

through lifetimes visions

carrying Earth wound.

 

to taste happiness never was my destiny,

I'm the giver,

try to love me not

I'm not Yours.

 

but,

through the deepening of Your breath,

embrace me~

I'm the seer

the soul of Love.

 

*

I leave You no words,

 only wild femininity.

don't tame me;

feel me…

I~

who dies thousands of times

through the daffodils scent,

and lives eternally

 Poetry.in 




©  Gh~*

11.Feb.2019

© 2019 Light


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' .. I leave You no words, - only wild femininity. - don't tame me; - feel me.. '

There's power in those phrases. Such wonderful and richly laid words. Seemed to me that to read aloud is to understand the freedom of passion growing and - surviving. Brava!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

8 Months Ago

I love how You take it and feel it dear Emma, I'm always grateful for Your beautiful sense and feeli.. read more



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You have woven such an extravagant vision of loving, of living into eternity in the divine places of bliss that poets and dreamers long for. Yes, let there be wildness, freedom into the fragrance of silence... this place beyond words. And the silence is glorious.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You so much my dear friend for blessing me again with Your fine poetical presence, always my d.. read more
the pic is incredible!! i love it ... it is all feminine power and sensuousness ... but my first gaze is to the light above and part of her ... your poem complements the pic and theme very well says i .. closing 2 vs are my favorites ... and you brought in poetry!!! how very cool! i think this is such a fine complete package, Light ... stunning beauty from body and soul
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

somehow I'm always able to find the satisfying pictures to my poems, yes I'm lucky YUUUPPIEEEE! lol .. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

this is a stunning package says i ... i see chakra red in the painting ...energy, passion, power and.. read more
i would very much like to dive into that painting as i dived into those words a gentle and sharp glance into the heart but i cant help wondering if this is you or if this is muse or maybe its both but it doesn't matter it is beautiful, enticing and sweet-sad. I beg to differ tho you taste happiness like a seasoned vintner does his labor and share it as such

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Months Ago

dear Bunny You asked such a prime question to/for me, I always wanted to keep it to my own self beca.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

6 Months Ago

I do believe i would call that a poets nirvana and truthfully i'm not too surprised at your answer y.. read more
Light

6 Months Ago

You are so kind with Your understanding my friend, not to mention again how keen You are, Thank You .. read more
I love the phrasing of your works... This one in particular has now become my favorite... The soft feel of the poem along with its deep message really touched my heart... Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Months Ago

Thank You for Your warm kindness my friend, I'm pleased to know of Your liking, Your visit is so swe.. read more
DarkMist

6 Months Ago

It was entirely my pleasure :)
Your photo could not be any better for this piece.
Smooth and fragrant your words wildly pollinate this garden of hearts.

Posted 7 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Light

7 Months Ago

how dear and treasured Your words my lovely friend, Thanking You with my warmest gratitude for such .. read more
Deep and meaningful as always, Butterfly. Takes your reader right into the warmth of your words. Sensually romantic with a soft passion exciting the readers imagination to the max. Nice work! Thank you for sharing these sentiments with us.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

7 Months Ago

and now my heart feels like dancing to Your lovely praises and sweet warm trace upon my page, Thank .. read more
kitty

7 Months Ago

My pleasure always.
don't try to tame me or own me....i don't want or need that..but i will freely give you my eternal love...
poets do live and die in their poetry...and they love so passionately with their words...often with much more force than they could ever do away from the page.
nicely done...a poem within a poem.
j.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

7 Months Ago

deep, real and moving thoughts my friend, thank You for these beautiful words on my page again, I'm .. read more
You are a goddess, a sacred mystery, a perfect blending of the sensual and the ethereal- like Nature herself dear friend. No one lives, breathes, loves or writes like you...”and lives eternally Poetry.in”. This poem is you and rises, with you, to the heavens. We read and we feel you dance in the beauty of language and Light...”I’m the giver” - yes, you are born and die and live again and you give the world a precious and intensely personal gift. You are the personification of love and grace and the fragrance of your words is as golden as the daffodil. I will save this poem in my heart always.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

7 Months Ago

I'm overwhelmed to the limit that I'm speechless with nothing to say yet again my dearest Annette..... read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

7 Months Ago

❤️🌺❤️🌸🌞🌻🌼🌸🌹🌷💐❤️
Beautiful poem. Each line is wonderful and I really liked the language. Last lines are very nice and I think I am not gonna forget them for a long time. Great work 👍

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

7 Months Ago

very kind of You my friend, I'm pleased to receive Your appreciations, and know they are received wi.. read more
Anjeline

7 Months Ago

You're welcome :)
Dear Light, how I wish I could write with such delicate sensuality. I haven't got it in me, so well done you. Your first stanza is definitely out of this world. Waterfalls are incredibly beautiful. It is lovely to see you posting again.

Chris

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

7 Months Ago

You are far too kind to me dear Chris, thanking You with my heartfelt gratitude for such sweet welco.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

You are more than welcome. Have a wonderful day :)

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