the keeper

the giver, the seer, the keeper.

arling,D

 

Your fairness like freedom

beautifies and falls,

with the sounds

of waterfalls stirring the way up

to heavens.

 

Your warmth dwells,

when there is no You

to wrap my body, my heart

in the essence of my soul

bonding with Thou~

inundating as a river.  

~

I've been the Keeper

through lifetimes visions

carrying Earth wound.

 

to taste happiness never was my destiny,

I'm the giver,

try to love me not

I'm not Yours.

 

but,

through the deepening of Your breath,

embrace me~

I'm the seer

the soul of Love.

 

*

I leave You no words,

 only wild femininity.

don't tame me;

feel me…

I~

who dies thousands of times

through the daffodils scent,

and lives eternally

 Poetry.in 

©  Gh~*

11.Feb.2019

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' .. I leave You no words, - only wild femininity. - don't tame me; - feel me.. '

There's power in those phrases. Such wonderful and richly laid words. Seemed to me that to read aloud is to understand the freedom of passion growing and - surviving. Brava!

[lightsong]

I love how You take it and feel it dear Emma, I'm always grateful for Your beautiful sense and feelings, thanking You with my kindness 🌸💜🌸

[Patricia Wedel]

A daffodil's scent is sweet to the soul...
embracing the spring rain where
summer sleeps and marigolds weep...
gently, Pat

[barleygirl]

I read this a few times, trying to figure out the different parts. It seems to me a narrator is having a thought exchange with a spiritual entity (God, or the universe, being the middle italicized part). I'm not catching a strong connection of one part to another, so I won't comment on the totality of your message. There are some parts I love, tho . . . V2 is an ethereal depiction of how it can feel when we are in emotional contact with an angel presence who was once a beloved on earth . . . and I especially love "don't tame me" . . . a message at the core of my own being! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[An owl on the moon]

You have woven such an extravagant vision of loving, of living into eternity in the divine places of bliss that poets and dreamers long for. Yes, let there be wildness, freedom into the fragrance of silence... this place beyond words. And the silence is glorious.

[lightsong]

Thank You so much my dear friend for blessing me again with Your fine poetical presence, always my deep gratitude ✨

[Einstein Noodle]

the pic is incredible!! i love it ... it is all feminine power and sensuousness ... but my first gaze is to the light above and part of her ... your poem complements the pic and theme very well says i .. closing 2 vs are my favorites ... and you brought in poetry!!! how very cool! i think this is such a fine complete package, Light ... stunning beauty from body and soul
E.

[lightsong]

somehow I'm always able to find the satisfying pictures to my poems, yes I'm lucky YUUUPPIEEEE! lol Thank You my dear E~ You made smile and happy with Your beautiful words and nice praise, always my pleasure to have You on my pages :)

[Einstein Noodle]

this is a stunning package says i ... i see chakra red in the painting ...energy, passion, power and animal ;)

[Robert Trakofler]

i would very much like to dive into that painting as i dived into those words a gentle and sharp glance into the heart but i cant help wondering if this is you or if this is muse or maybe its both but it doesn't matter it is beautiful, enticing and sweet-sad. I beg to differ tho you taste happiness like a seasoned vintner does his labor and share it as such

[lightsong]

dear Bunny You asked such a prime question to/for me, I always wanted to keep it to my own self because I know many will not like or agree to my answer, will judge me or think I'm full of ego, but since Your keenness already grasped it I think You deserve to be shared with it, I actually don't have a muse, nor I like to name it as a "muse", my muse is me, and all my writes are coming from something which I'm really is, I hope You can understand my honesty and accept me "ego" words lol

Your amazing visit such a delightful treat today, thank You with abundance ✨

[Robert Trakofler]

I do believe i would call that a poets nirvana and truthfully i'm not too surprised at your answer your countenance shows thru in your weaving's

[lightsong]

You are so kind with Your understanding my friend, not to mention again how keen You are, Thank You sincerely with all my heart ✨💓✨

[DarkMist]

I love the phrasing of your works... This one in particular has now become my favorite... The soft feel of the poem along with its deep message really touched my heart... Thank you for sharing :)

[lightsong]

Thank You for Your warm kindness my friend, I'm pleased to know of Your liking, Your visit is so sweet and made my morning more happier, Thank You 🌸🌷🌸

[DarkMist]

It was entirely my pleasure :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

Your photo could not be any better for this piece.
Smooth and fragrant your words wildly pollinate this garden of hearts.

[lightsong]

how dear and treasured Your words my lovely friend, Thanking You with my warmest gratitude for such a beautiful gift ✨🌸🌼🌸✨

[kitty]

Deep and meaningful as always, Butterfly. Takes your reader right into the warmth of your words. Sensually romantic with a soft passion exciting the readers imagination to the max. Nice work! Thank you for sharing these sentiments with us.

[lightsong]

and now my heart feels like dancing to Your lovely praises and sweet warm trace upon my page, Thank You my dear Kitty 🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷

[kitty]

My pleasure always.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

don't try to tame me or own me....i don't want or need that..but i will freely give you my eternal love...
poets do live and die in their poetry...and they love so passionately with their words...often with much more force than they could ever do away from the page.
nicely done...a poem within a poem.
j.

[lightsong]

deep, real and moving thoughts my friend, thank You for these beautiful words on my page again, I'm grateful for the time You've gifted me and my humble pen today 🌷🌷🌷

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You are a goddess, a sacred mystery, a perfect blending of the sensual and the ethereal- like Nature herself dear friend. No one lives, breathes, loves or writes like you...”and lives eternally Poetry.in”. This poem is you and rises, with you, to the heavens. We read and we feel you dance in the beauty of language and Light...”I’m the giver” - yes, you are born and die and live again and you give the world a precious and intensely personal gift. You are the personification of love and grace and the fragrance of your words is as golden as the daffodil. I will save this poem in my heart always.

[lightsong]

I'm overwhelmed to the limit that I'm speechless with nothing to say yet again my dearest Annette... again Your ever remarkable gorgeous keen mind, heart, and spirit graced me and still do by the way You can read and feel me, each nuance of each line is a golden grace, I really have nothing to say, instead I ask each star above to give You each night a beautiful gift as only a one of kind person, a true majestic Queen a Goddess of Earth deserves, Love You so so very much 💕 and this another special print from You to be saved to my heart ❤️️

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

❤️🌺❤️🌸🌞🌻🌼🌸🌹🌷💐❤️