Heaven

when words fail, let tears rise.

a rose is a rose,

a flower is a flower.

the tree, will always be a tree.

 

the butterflies and fireflies

small graces to stir the world,

 still I don't belong here

only through Your precious visage.

 

You gift me not Love,

something beyond, more sublime.

You feel me,

my Soul as Yours;

one

embraced within

Your warm body.

 

 

 

©  Gh

23.March.2019

Author's Note

tribute to someone special.

Reviews

[Richard 🍃]

Goodness, Dear Ghounwah🌟
For that "special someone" ⁓ whomsoever this wonderful tribute of sheer spiritual connection is in homage to, surely, feels and completely embraces your soul to merge and wed with their own, no doubt.
I have read some heavenly poems in my lifetime, but none so amazing enthralling and touching as this is to my own being's heart.

I bow in great humbleness, with my every soul-filled fibre, for the privilege and pleasure of sharing this one with You … thank you most graciously, Dear Poetess ⁓ Richard ✨

[lightsong]

it's not necessarily to be about Love, sometimes we have an experience lead us to write, I let the words flew without thinking how they will be at the end, I just let them flew.

Thank You dear Richard for such an amazing review, Your visit means a lot and I'm thanking You with sincere gratitude✨

[Ankita Dwivedi]

ineed a tribute to someone special and a heart warming poem .Loved rreading it ..
Love, Ankita

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Light... to embrace a Peony is like choosing a perfume...
some may prefer a Rose that blends with your skin... while
others may prefer to linger in branches of Wisteria. To each his own
will be a song when searching in a garden of forever vows.
gently, Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

ohhhhh how very precious, sublime, transcendental ... the relationship your poem tributes is rare says i .. if anyone should write about it it is you Light! just simply beautiful and divine .. great title, love the pic and you have a winner of a poem says i ... there is gracefulness in the rhythm of reading it, its profoundly emotive, your word choices are everyday but you have put them together and brought everyone a real treat of a read .. thanks so much for sharing my friend!
E.

[lightsong]

aren't You just gorgeous with Your beautiful understanding and feelings? dearest E? You bless me every time You are on my page, and today You bless me even more...

[Einstein Noodle]

its mutual Light ... i think we are the same in a lot of powerful ways ... truth seeking introverts ;))

[lightsong]

We Are :) (: ✨✨

[Fay Slimm]

The closeness of soul with another comes through with superb expressions in this gem of a read dear Light -- I enjoyed every phrase and my favourite has to be
"You gift me not Love,
something beyond, more sublime." - -- - thank you so much for sharing this tribute to someone special.

"

[lightsong]

ah my dear THANK You! I feel You felt me and this is an ultimate honer received. my warmest gratitude for You and for Your gift upon my humble poem🌷

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most emotional and brave piece, laying feelings scattered upon the reader is always risky, however you fill us with hope, well done, good read.

[lightsong]

Those are but thoughtfully beautiful words my friend! Your gift to my poem is so sweet, thank You for Your kindness taking the time to read and review, much appreciated ♥️

[JungLee]

Very sweet poem. Sounds very romantic c:

[lightsong]

Thank You dear JungLee for the sweet words and the kind visit, sending You the best wishes✨

[JungLee]

Thank you c:

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Love is that invisible thread that connects us in ohhh so many ways...beautiful....love is everything and all in one....formless yet such presence ...shapeless but takes on all sizes and forms...just us all complete....oh what a lucky someone special....🌹🌹🌹

[lightsong]

and You write poetry and love everywhere and anywhere You step into.... such as here, upon my humble page. Thank You dear Loving Angel🌟

[...]

I was talking exactly about this. "Words are often short for the vastness of emotions". Most fail, some beer care, some like me frustrated but all kinds are living their ways.
For this poem it says much! It's a feeling one!

Keep writing!

[lightsong]

oh my dear how beautifully heartfelt Your words are! they touch me deep with their sweet wisdom. Thank You for the grace on my page today ✨

[AJNJ]

Your poetry is softly spiritual and gentle in its expressions. Your words have a delicate femininity and grace to them. A poem such as this is a perfect expression of soulful love in all its lasting beauty. Your spiritual affinity for nature is also appreciated by this reader. Kudos!

[lightsong]

Hi there my friend 🌷

How sweet are Your words to this heart of mine, thank You so much for reading and leaving such a warm review, I hope the "other" You isn't here anymore, if he ever appeared again, just call me I will show him my ugly side ;)

[AJNJ]

It’s a pleasure reading your poetry, friend Light.

There’s one request. My only link is: https://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AJNJ/. So if you ever receive anything from anywhere other than this link, I’ll be grateful if you please let me know. Many people have just blocked me after that incident without clarifying with me even once, which saddens me. Yet as long as I have Light on my side I am comfortable and safe! ;)
Thanks for responding with such kindness.

[lightsong]

I've noted before on my page to my friends here that there are two accounts for You, that one of them is fake, I think it didn't help You that much lol I will see what I can do though, You are very welcome if that happened to me I think I will become totally crazy 😱😱😱 will be reading You soon :)

[AJNJ]

I’m barely surviving, my friend :)
Thank you once again. It means very much. 🤗

[lightsong]

hang on there! 💪

[AJNJ]

🤗 sure thing !

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is beautiful and wonderful. The words danced to perfect ending. To find someone to excite your soul. This is utopia for two people. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[lightsong]

Thank You my kind friend, though this poem is simple in the language and maybe different from what I write, still it's close to my heart, I'm happy that You read and enjoyed it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome dear Poet.