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Heaven

Heaven

A Poem by lightsong
"

when words fail, let tears rise.

"



a rose is a rose,

a flower is a flower.

the tree, will always be a tree.

 

the butterflies and fireflies

small graces to stir the world,

 still I don't belong here

only through your precious visage.

 

you gift me not love,

something beyond, more sublime.

you feel me,

my soul as yours;

one

embraced within

your warm body.

 

 

 

© Gh

23.March.2019

© 2021 lightsong


Author's Note

lightsong
tribute to someone special.

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You state in the first stanza that nature is what it is. It can be beautiful, can be mundane. The second stanza includes the small little things that flutter and flit and bring some happiness and comfort, but this poem is about the love and beauty that transcends the earthly and there is an emotion that is higher than what we can imagine. Third stanza, second line, last word. Sublime. It is that what your poem reaches. CD

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

3 Weeks Ago

Excuse my late response for your very beautiful and understanding review CD, I was away from the sit.. read more



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There are those connections in life's journey that fill us with so much more than what is conventional and typical of all, a rare communion and with which we bless and are blessed. Thanks for sharing this kindly!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

2 Weeks Ago

Lovely understanding and heartfelt words my friend, Thank You kindly too, for taking the time to rea.. read more
Soft romance well done until we come to something that is far more fundamental. A lovely piece that I got a lot from.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

2 Weeks Ago

Thank You so much Mr. Ken for your lovely words and the kind visit, I appreciate it so much :>
This was soft and delicate and deeply beautiful. Of all that I am given nothing is you and even close. This poem reaches out and touches the reader, caresses their heart and their mind and whispers smiles from the page. Really nice

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Month Ago

exactly as your review leaving me with soft smiles :>

Thank You for the loving, tende.. read more
Hello, my dear friend... I see you are back on the computer as I am...Sometimes life gets in our way...right...
Hugs to you as I reread again this lovely sincere poem of yours.
Lisa, almost time for dinner... and I am "starved"

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

3 Weeks Ago

Will be there soon to review it my dear. Hugs and Love*
Lisasview

2 Weeks Ago

Wonderful…
Thank you
lightsong

2 Weeks Ago

I already read and review it yesterday. perfect Sonnet 😊
Hi there,
Popping by to say good morning,
I have not been on the computer much these past couple of weeks but today I am planning to stay home and work on my new poem...plus, do gardening and make jam, etc...ha ha...never a dull moment..
Hugs,
Lisa

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thank you for the whisper... my dear Ghounwah Lightsong

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

4 Months Ago

Thank You my Angel 🤍
You state in the first stanza that nature is what it is. It can be beautiful, can be mundane. The second stanza includes the small little things that flutter and flit and bring some happiness and comfort, but this poem is about the love and beauty that transcends the earthly and there is an emotion that is higher than what we can imagine. Third stanza, second line, last word. Sublime. It is that what your poem reaches. CD

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

3 Weeks Ago

Excuse my late response for your very beautiful and understanding review CD, I was away from the sit.. read more
This is so beautiful, Heaven is where the heart feels most comfortable, perhaps in nature or found in a warm touch. This poem reminded me of the song "Heaven is a place on Earth" by Belinda Carlisle...

"Oh Heaven is a place on earth
They say in Heaven, love comes first
We'll make Heaven a place on Earth" , your poem reminds me of this part of the song because heaven is found where love is, love of nature, love of a person. Beautiful! Thanks for sharing!



Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

4 Months Ago

I love Belinda, as I love the 80th and 90th. What You say is true dear Aura, Love is limitless with .. read more
Aura

4 Months Ago

You are welcome!
A lovely poetic declaration of love and appreciation! Beautifully written!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

4 Months Ago

:> your beautiful words make me smile* thank You so much my friend for taking the time to read and r.. read more
Another masterpiece by the gifted Lightsong. Heaven is a beautiful concept but it has left human confused for thousand of years,because if human beings can not make the world around them heaven so they can not search for it in other universe. When I think of heaven, I remember John Lennon's song:
Imagine there's no heaven
It's easy if you try
No hell below us
Above us, only sky
Imagine all the people
Livin' for today

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nima.Hope

4 Months Ago

I think it's not hard to do. Some problems that we are having today are very silly and sad. The prob.. read more
lightsong

4 Months Ago

People always try to find fault before goodness, see th empty space of the cup instead of the full s.. read more
Nima.Hope

4 Months Ago

That's a very sad fact.

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