Our Soul

Our Soul

A Poem by Light

don’t miss me,

a part of me is still breathing

somewhere precious

only you know.

 

and would you release me,

through the blossoming trees

cherries or poplars,

it’s always April

when my spirit in throes

to die or to rebirth.

~

 

Through eternity

my lips are your lips

my soul has birthed ~Thou

His presence, His breath.

 

I don’t need to breathe

that I've found You

my little precious,

in the tides of destiny

Your Soul has emerged from mine.

 

would You release me

closer to You

closer to Heaven.

I have unfolded

 the essence of the universe

inside my heart.

 

 

© 26.March.2019

© 2019 Light


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There are times - although rare, when a reader stops to shake head, calm the heart.. then.. sigh and gasp til... able to read again. You write so beautifully.. laying open your thoughts without apology or arrogance.. and, always, beautifully. Your gift is to express with the most peaceful and exquisite pen in equal manner. Thank you... for curing this and that, this morning. x

'I have unfolded - the essence of the universe - inside my heart.'

Posted 6 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

dearest emma, Thank You for these special and beautiful words Your heart has gifted mine, it's alway.. read more
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emmajoy

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much. :)



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You know so well how to create words and thoughts that are vast and yet deeply intimate. What a joy to feel this loving connection, so alive through time and space, as twin flames of light woven into one beam. It truly makes me long for the next verses, the coming passages of your pathway walked into this sacred oneness.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

didn't I tell You I'm the queen of delay? so sorry for taking this late to respond to Your very beau.. read more
An owl on the moon

1 Month Ago

Ah, you are surely a queen... and if you rule the land of Delay, it must be a wondrous space. :)
Light

1 Month Ago

and surely You do know how to make a Lady smile and happy ✨🌸🌹🌸✨
I am so glad I caught this posting today - - it has reawakened my belief in the bliss which follows demise.......... a chorus of reasons billows from each stanza to unfold love's essence and know that it lasts forever and ever.......... a wonderful release - - thank you for the peep inside your warm heart dear Light.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

my deep gratitude for Your heartwarming review dear Fay, Your loveliness flows through Your words an.. read more
incredible transcendental thought woven in a gentle sigh of release ... i see your speaker watching a grieving mate ... spiritual whispers its all right ... i'm ok ... its rather glorious ;) i especially am impacted by the unfolding you speak of:
"the essence of the universe
inside my heart." ... stunning says i! and very fine wrap up for your poem ... namaste' Light! ;)
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Light

3 Months Ago

beautifully poetic, deeply felt and spoken from the heart review dear gentle E~ what's more one woul.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

:) ................
This reminds me of something I've been missing, yet have always been searching for. The thought in the depths of my mind that lingers when I can't put my finger on a feeling. Something I didn't know I wanted. until I knew I needed to hear. This message I've always kept in mind, and held in heart. I felt all of this. Very vivid and beautiful. Great read, my friend.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

Thank You my lovely friend for such a sincere heartfelt review coming from Your heart, sometimes it .. read more
Laurierose

4 Months Ago

Of course! One of my favorite pieces by far. :)
Reads like a tribute to another kindred soul.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for Your kind read and visit, and yes You can say it's something like that, Your.. read more
This is vast...open and honest and lilting with the soft spoken words of true loves presence. It has such a relaxed and unassuming tone, I could hear my breathing while I read it. Lovely.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

Hi dear Crowley, I hope You are doing well with life treating You kindly my friend, and thank You so.. read more
And inside the heart is where the essence of all life and live and meaning lies- the soul ties- i just have to wonder y so many people harbour lies here- nit being honest to their true - you- oh beautiful words and my wish is that the truth if all will emerge and want to be reborn- its souls like ours that lay tattered and torn watching waiting for them to see deeper and know that its the heart that all truth does show- blessings and love in abundance dearest light❤️🌹❤️

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

Morning dearest Kelly, Thank You also with abundance for showing and shining here with Your sincere .. read more
This poem is more than a collection of lovely images Light. You are sharing the idea or belief that life goes on forever through rebirth. Not everyone will share this as a religious belief but there is some deep understanding that we are in some way at one with nature. In our present dire straits we all need to hang on to this.I
All the best.
Alan


Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

true, wise and knowing what You say my friend, my warm thanks for visiting me with Your valuable tho.. read more
This amazing poem has taste of love and eternity and immortal human values. We are all one, and I love the title "our soul". Really the last strophe is so powerful :
I have unfolded
the essence of the universe
inside my heart.

what I can call Poetry :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

You are very kind and sweet to me my friend, Thank You so much for these wonderful words and the hea.. read more

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