April

April

A Poem by Light🌟
"

selfishly, privately, I love You

"

Give me Your smile,

I will long-live my heart

full and overwhelmed 

to show You the wisdom

of a Love that freshens

the weary earth. 

 

I miss You, not with tears
slowly with warmth.

guard You  

inside the sun-kissed spring 

watch You grow, a dream
guard You

an overflowing feeling;

 left blessed

as young buds richen the air

young love that never dies.

 

rise in love with me

that I breathe in You

You know

my soul will always be

the cherry blossom of March

You will always be,

HerApril~




©  Gh

11.March.2020

© 2020 Light🌟


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The grace of your touch dear Ghounwah is a treasure beyond my ability to write! This expression is so raw, beautiful and courageous:) may your heart continue to bloom in the resplendence that is you:) this is so beautiful a poem it is hard for me to even remark
قلب أغنية الضوء هو أروع شيء عرفته في حياتي

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light🌟

6 Months Ago

honestly dear Robert, You are giving this "lightsong' heart" so much so that it's also hard for her .. read more



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I love how you wrote the poem and the choice of words was used delicately. Your poem screams richness and I love it!! I'd love to see more of your work

Posted 1 Week Ago


Lovely are your words to fill the heart with enjoyment ;-]

Posted 4 Months Ago


I love how you gently personify the way we feel toward different months, especially April, since it's here right now & we place so many hopes upon it. First, there's the never-ending burden of bringing us spring . . . you express this in the way your fervor increases as the poem goes along, as if April is building up a head of steam for presenting the thing we most look to her for! *smile* So nice to read happy thoughts instead of fear-mongering & strife! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


dearest Light... tender blossoms appear when April arrives... she is like a Lady who knows how to seduce secret feelings of beauty when skies are misty... the scent of lavender and myrr... gently rendered. truly, Pat

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light🌟

6 Months Ago

My dear Patricia✨ You always leave such poetical gorgeous reviews, You understand and feel it righ.. read more
Patricia Wedel

6 Months Ago

dearest Light ... a gift from my Muse... blessings from poets like you... to light the path to “Gl.. read more
Light🌟

6 Months Ago

Your Heart is Golden dearest Pat ✨💛✨
Oh the power of your poetry Light. You take me to a warm, sun-kissed spring, to a place of cherry blossoms where young buds richen the air, young love that never dies.

As spring freshens the weary earth, you enliven my soul. You are such a great believer in the power of lasting love!

You transmit that joy to all who read you, Lovely Light.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light🌟

6 Months Ago

You my dear Raina such a beautiful flower🌸 with the sweetest scent, You bless me with that sweete.. read more
Rania

6 Months Ago

You are welcome always. You make such a difference to this place with your love and the sweetest of .. read more
This has an old world elegance to it. I love the inter woven spring with a love story has/had blossomed. Gentle and loving

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light🌟

6 Months Ago

thank You for these lovely words received in this morning my dear friend. Your kindness is much appr.. read more
How nice it is to see this poet's work again. Though it is not yet officially spring, it's close enough for a poem such as this one, which seems to speak of new life and refreshing warmth after the long winter. Although the addressee is apparently not accessible as yet, the speaker overflows with expressions of affection and undying love. The last verse is particularly moving, using the imagery of the breath to add a spiritual dimension to the work.
PS: Consider dropping the comma after freshens in verse 1. Also, in the last verse consider changing knew to know, and adding be after always.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light🌟

6 Months Ago

Hi there dear John, long time no see my longtime friend🌸 so happy to see You this morning on my p.. read more
John the Baptist

6 Months Ago

Very nice to hear from you, my dear. Hope you and yours are faring well during this pandemic.
Light🌟

6 Months Ago

I missed Yo too dearest John, I was away from the site for long months I back a short time ago. You .. read more

to say this was a pretty poem would be such an understatement, for it is far more than that, tis quite beautiful... to suggest it was perfect might be pushing it perhaps, but not by so much to notice... Congratulations my very dear Friend and poet, I realise that I am a day late in visiting, but I just knew something special would be arriving soon, just like this poems namesake 'April'..

Take care G Girl and stay safe :)

Neville

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light🌟

6 Months Ago

and I was just wondering where is our Neville* ;)

never too late to receive Your love.. read more
I take it, to my heart.
Those who love privately and keep their love always lurking upon their beloved with rich affection in their eyes are the epitome of true love to be true. Our dear ground no wonder how much loves the sky, guess what goes through her seeing sky so much away with stars seem to be resting so close to him.
All are not destined to be together, at least one can't force her or his love on someone. One's unexpressed love can be kept so safe all alone.
I know you know that i love this write! A cosmos full of thanks to you~ Be blessed♡♡

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light🌟

6 Months Ago

open Your heart m Sweet and Your true love must come to You someday. Be Blessed Yo too 🤗
Tahsin.Z🍁

6 Months Ago

I will and I'll wait😌 Kudos🍀
Light🌟

6 Months Ago

Good girl! 😉
Oh how beautiful....and my birth month....love all around ...showing your hearts truth as always....April love ....❤️🌹❤️

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light🌟

6 Months Ago

Oh! that my lovely dearest Kelly🌹was born in April! now I love Her even more 💓💓💓 me was .. read more

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