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A Poem by lightsong
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when lights go down~ I know you, I feel you, I cup you, I light you.

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Sleep, my soul
inside thy buds
 inspire the old branches
and wait for his arrival,
ethereal and fresh, she awakes 
a keeper of healing and growth.

Wilderness has the mirrors
to reflect my entity 
in pure fragrances and raw springs
mystic natureprints,
the awe of varied creation
the mystery of tough wind
blowing on another side,
a gentle breeze.

abandoned, 
somewhere between air and waterfall 
a place only the heart knows
contented, 
I am loyalty to authenticity 
only a soul aspires.

I may be a poetess
a composer of words, they say
still I am a lightseeder 
a bearer of love
a holder of the invisible, 
with my penbeats I voice the divine
and I cup a piece of heaven
between my palms.



24.April.2021

© 2021 lightsong


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Your expression is acutly depicted on this canvas and can only be misunderstood by someone more interested in what others say then your reality of being sectioned alone

Posted 1 Week Ago


You paint a great picture with your words. I am impressed.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

2 Weeks Ago

:> many warm thanks for the sweet kindness my friend, I am grateful ✨
Ranger Kessel

2 Weeks Ago

Youre welcome
Wow, a very scenic ride. You should be very proud of this one, it is wonderful.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

3 Months Ago

awaaa! Thank You so much my friend I am smiling ear to ear :> both humbled and glad by your praise e.. read more
Really.. not sure how to even say what I feel..because my emotions have gotten in my way..
Your word are so amazing and touch my heart in the best way...
I always read what you write several times...
This one was truly amazing,
Lisa, in Spain..


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

3 Months Ago

Thank You my dearest~ You truly warm my heart in this cold evening with your gentle and sincere feel.. read more
Lisasview

3 Months Ago

You are most welcome..Always glad to be connected.
That Heaven could be held so... It seems like an improbable dream! But, Oh! The Beauty! Such images, my friend. A most lovely write.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

4 Months Ago

again, your appreciation to my words is very welcomed with warm gratitude, You gave me a lot of your.. read more
M. J. Smith

4 Months Ago

You are most welcome, my friend. It was my pleasure.
lightsong

4 Months Ago

Thank You sweetly my kind friend :>
Loyal and authentic to the words. You've just seeded light in me! I'm hearing the beat of your pen and like it!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

7 Months Ago

beautiful and original, sincere and heartfelt words my friend, Thank You so much for such loveliness.. read more
I was drawn to this because of it’s title. But if anything this a delicate piece of writing. I wouldn’t describe this as raw but more in the direction of light and sensitivity. It’s a passionate read. The beauty of it speaks for itself. I like it!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

7 Months Ago

how sweet and thoughtful words :> thank You kindly my friend for checking my poem and leaving your b.. read more
Wilderness has the mirrors
to reflect my entity
in pure fragrances and raw springs
mystic natureprints,

I really love this part, This is amazing and kind of intriguing as well

Posted 7 Months Ago


Lovely poem, such beautiful words and i really loved this line" Wilderness has the mirrors to reflect my entity".. How do u find such elegant imagery my friend ?

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

8 Months Ago

Hi Sweetie*

Thank You for taking the time to read and review my poem here for your l.. read more
Kathy Mc Cathy

8 Months Ago

Hey !
your heart filled with grace and faith
how the waterfall flow with serenity and .. read more
lightsong

8 Months Ago

You see You already have a poem in your wonderful response to me :) so soon yes wait for me ;)

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