raw

when lights go down~ I know you, I feel you, I cup you, I light you.

Sleep, my soul

inside thy buds

 inspire the old branches

and wait for his arrival,

ethereal and fresh, she awakes 

a keeper of healing and growth.

Wilderness has the mirrors

to reflect my entity 

in pure fragrances and raw springs

mystic natureprints,

the awe of varied creation

the mystery of tough wind

blowing on another side,

a gentle breeze.

abandoned, 

somewhere between air and waterfall 

a place only the heart knows

contented, 

I am loyalty to authenticity 

only a soul aspires.

I may be a poetess

a composer of words, they say

still I am a lightseeder 

a bearer of love

a holder of the invisible, 

with my penbeats I voice the divine

and I cup a piece of heaven

between my palms.

24.April.2021

Reviews

[Jock Engelman]

Your expression is acutly depicted on this canvas and can only be misunderstood by someone more interested in what others say then your reality of being sectioned alone

[Ranger Kessel]

You paint a great picture with your words. I am impressed.

[lightsong]

:> many warm thanks for the sweet kindness my friend, I am grateful ✨

[Ranger Kessel]

Youre welcome

[JE Falcon]

Wow, a very scenic ride. You should be very proud of this one, it is wonderful.

[lightsong]

awaaa! Thank You so much my friend I am smiling ear to ear :> both humbled and glad by your praise even more since this piece is close to my heart. Bless You ~

[Lisasview]

Really.. not sure how to even say what I feel..because my emotions have gotten in my way..
Your word are so amazing and touch my heart in the best way...
I always read what you write several times...
This one was truly amazing,
Lisa, in Spain..

[lightsong]

Thank You my dearest~ You truly warm my heart in this cold evening with your gentle and sincere feelings, specially that this piece is along few others that are dear to my heart. If I couldn't find time this evening to review You, I will do it for sure tomorrow. Bless You for the kindness You left me with :>

Ghounwah* in Sryia :.

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome..Always glad to be connected.

[M. J. Smith]

That Heaven could be held so... It seems like an improbable dream! But, Oh! The Beauty! Such images, my friend. A most lovely write.

[lightsong]

again, your appreciation to my words is very welcomed with warm gratitude, You gave me a lot of your time reading and reviewing me, your kindness I shall return soon my friend, Thank You so much.

[M. J. Smith]

You are most welcome, my friend. It was my pleasure.

[lightsong]

Thank You sweetly my kind friend :>

[William Michael Reeves]

Loyal and authentic to the words. You've just seeded light in me! I'm hearing the beat of your pen and like it!

[lightsong]

beautiful and original, sincere and heartfelt words my friend, Thank You so much for such loveliness, I am so grateful for your visit.

[R E Tree]

I was drawn to this because of it’s title. But if anything this a delicate piece of writing. I wouldn’t describe this as raw but more in the direction of light and sensitivity. It’s a passionate read. The beauty of it speaks for itself. I like it!

[lightsong]

how sweet and thoughtful words :> thank You kindly my friend for checking my poem and leaving your beautiful print, are You new here? if so I wish wonderful times here❤️

[no tell writer]

Wilderness has the mirrors
to reflect my entity
in pure fragrances and raw springs
mystic natureprints,

I really love this part, This is amazing and kind of intriguing as well

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

Lovely poem, such beautiful words and i really loved this line" Wilderness has the mirrors to reflect my entity".. How do u find such elegant imagery my friend ?

[lightsong]

Hi Sweetie*

Thank You for taking the time to read and review my poem here for your lovely words and oh I find it in the heart ;)

I hope You are enjoying your time here, will be there soon on your page~

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

Hey !
your heart filled with grace and faith
how the waterfall flow with serenity and peace
Beautiful imageries and thoughts in your heart so deep
I really love your poems , I am very much enjoying my times here , reading lovely poems and getting inspired by them , haha ill be waiting .

[lightsong]

You see You already have a poem in your wonderful response to me :) so soon yes wait for me ;)