co~write

co~write

A Poem by lightsong
"

I am all of that.

"


  Words, I don’t need

  when the skies open to me

  feelings, new and refreshed

  each time my heart is willing

  to beat far, 

  with precious Gods. 

 

  Of flowers' tenderness,

  the strength of trees

  the power of the storm,

  Rebuilding nature.

 

  Of the mornings' trust 

  the evenings' faithful prayers,

  the infinity of sunrise

  the oneness of sunset. 

 

  There is me,

  pursuing the grace,

  emerging to an occurrence

  of creation not of a page .

 

  Co~writing with,  

  what's made of me.

 

  Bless the spirit

  not the words.

 

  When I am already

   all of that.



©  Gh 

29.Oct.2022

          

© 2022 lightsong


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The whole poem is a wonderful example of poetry! But that first stanza, that first line, that last line - captivating. Your title and how it's woven creates a mysterious design of genre throughout this write that I really liked. Wonderfully explained and expressed. tyfs

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

2 Days Ago

there is not such a favorite song because there so many... give me options I may answer then :>
Cyprian Van Dyke

2 Days Ago

Too many options.
Have you ever heard of brandy by Looking glass? I think it's exceptional.
lightsong

2 Days Ago

The old song from the 70th? yes I listened to it yesterday, it is a good song :>



Reviews

The whole poem is a wonderful example of poetry! But that first stanza, that first line, that last line - captivating. Your title and how it's woven creates a mysterious design of genre throughout this write that I really liked. Wonderfully explained and expressed. tyfs

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

2 Days Ago

there is not such a favorite song because there so many... give me options I may answer then :>
Cyprian Van Dyke

2 Days Ago

Too many options.
Have you ever heard of brandy by Looking glass? I think it's exceptional.
lightsong

2 Days Ago

The old song from the 70th? yes I listened to it yesterday, it is a good song :>
simply divine. i love it. speaks from the soul to the soul. a real keeper. so glad i read this today ... :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Week Ago

It is me who is glad that I received these thoughtful beautiful words, heartfelt from soul to soul. .. read more
Strong sense of spirituality and appreciation for life's treasures.
This was a very nice feeling poem.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Week Ago

How lovely from You my friend :> Thank You kindly for your time and words, I appreciate it~
Dear lightsong, this is a beautiful spiritual offering. We are surrounded each day by the natural environment which can be so uplifting when other parts of our life can be in the doldrums. Nature can bring much joy. I am so happy to see you here. I have been struggling myself with words recently. My muse has not been kind to me. Have a wonderful Sunday.

Chris

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Week Ago

Good Day dear Chris 🌸

after months of not a single word, this is the first thing I.. read more


You are indeed ................ and what magical words You have placed here & so perfectly .. so as they may in my mind at least, serve as Your pillow .. Neville :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Week Ago

You always know how to make me smile :> I really thank You very much dear Neville. Bless You with so.. read more
Neville

1 Week Ago


You are as ever & always more than welcome .. much more :)
"The beautiful places, we can see.
The blessing of a new day,
the kindness of a smile shared.
To be able to dance with nature and
to know.
Flowers will bloom again in the Spring and
we will be able to find the sea, find the river.
And we shall have everything we need."
I loved your poem dear friend. I just scattered some words for you. Good late evening from Michigan.
Coyote

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

2 Weeks Ago

These beautiful heartwarming words are like You Coyote, we all know here how kind You are, how You l.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Weeks Ago

Hello dear friend. Good early morning from Michigan.
lightsong

1 Week Ago

Hi dear Johnnie* Good cloudy day from Latakia~
This is awesome and again, I can see the soul of Nizar Qabbani clapping for this poem, for it so much reminds me of him.
" Of the mornings' trust
the evenings' faithful prayers,
the infinity of sunrise
the oneness of sunset"
"mornings' trust" is both poetic,puzzling and confusing at the same time. A real mixture of feelings.
Salute to you my dear.


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

1 Month Ago

Thank You Dear💕
This poem seems to float across the page though with a defiance and surety that this existence is true and belongs wherever it descends. An amazing piece of writing that encapsulates the beauty that surrounds us all.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh yes!! Powerful thought, the power of a storm. One day's destruction is the next day's construction. Rebuilding and reshaping. The infinity of sunrise and all the potential of a new day. Then the sun sets on one day resetting the energy. And 'emerging to an occurance', and co-writing with your spirit. Such beautiful musical truth you sing in this song. Even if it is not of a page, so happy it made it to a page! So glad you are all of that and share it with us. Beautiful poem!!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

1 Month Ago

I read your poem a few hours ago and can't stop thinking about how the storms of our experience resh.. read more
I can attest to that; I watched as the skies opened up to you and I heard the trees speak of your heart and watched the petals open in the nourishment of your regard. You to me will always be, the flower in the desert dear Ghounwah:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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