UNTITLED

UNTITLED

A Poem by @r[@nE
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In this world full of chaos , we try to set our story in reality continuing that silent fight for the title of protagonist of our own untitled story. So basically the poem is all about that.

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Above this ovoid earth, underneath that eternal sky
a story sets in,
a long journey with several characters
that silent fight for the the title of protagonist begins.

Yes, indeed you are that character
seeking a chance to set your story in reality,
with that slight expectation of connecting to every character
you try to remove the cloak of invisibility.

You tend to weave your life story into a magnificent fiction
though it's just a playful creation of your mind,
life might just be a series of episodes or a book with chapters
with that main plot harder to find.

You may not like what's inside your story 
but turning the page is the only way to move on,
at some point past will come to an end with elated tomorrow
just how that long night ends with beginning of the dawn.

Yes we want to be the main lead 
realistically in everyone's life 
but maturing is realizing that even the hero for villain is he himself
though for you he is an antagonist with a sharp knife.

Exploring others is not where fascination lies
as mystery lies within,
don't forget, you are the beginning and you are the end
because you are the story which you yourself begin.

Don't you dare compare yourself with others
try to build yourself as a protagonist,
not for the world but at least for yourself 
or else you will go white blind in that never ending mist.

Me as writer of this poem is just a normal side character
but it's just in your story,
as I already am a protagonist in my life
seriously waiting for my glory.

Like how each attempt that ends in a narrative derailment
somehow gives rise to a new perspective,
patiently awaiting for that serendipitous weather
our thoughts turn reflective.

Your story at some point definitely comes to an end
just make sure not to regret at last because the story can't be resettled,
baffled in such a huge world full of chaos you try to find yourself
however at the end your unfinished story remains UNTITLED.

© 2022 @r[@nE


Author's Note

@r[@nE
Do ignore if there are some grammatical errors .

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I’ve seen quite a few poems and songs titled ‘untitled’ over the years, but I can honestly say that yours is the first and only one that I’ve personally seen that is done extremely cleverly and shall spring to my mind in future when I see ‘untitled’… I won’t give anything away here in the form of spoilers because it needs to be read in its entirety. Excellent.

Regards,

Lathen

Posted 5 Months Ago


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@r[@nE

3 Months Ago

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I sincerely appreciate it.



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I dig the style. Reminds me of myself so that's a nice compliment lol

Posted 6 Days Ago


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@r[@nE

6 Days Ago

The feeling of establishing oneself as a protagonist in real life is actually wish and dream of almo.. read more
i love the point of view for this poem. so well written. thank you

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@r[@nE

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
I’ve seen quite a few poems and songs titled ‘untitled’ over the years, but I can honestly say that yours is the first and only one that I’ve personally seen that is done extremely cleverly and shall spring to my mind in future when I see ‘untitled’… I won’t give anything away here in the form of spoilers because it needs to be read in its entirety. Excellent.

Regards,

Lathen

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
@r[@nE

3 Months Ago

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I sincerely appreciate it.

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