Falling in LoVe

Falling in LoVe

A Poem by @r[@nE
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Different person can have different perception regarding the feeling of love but it's weird to think how love is always about falling and not rising.

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She jumps from high above
taking a glance at that eternal blue sky,
enjoying the fresh gale
with that slight expectation to fly high.

But soon the dream starts to fall with her
the fall which is uncontrollable and so sudden,
smacking on the ground she finally realizes
the situational vulnerability and the emotinal burden.

This is love,

Love is always about falling for someone
why is it not about rising?
maybe because love is similar to that intense hole
full of mixed emotions truly masmerizing.

That deep extensive trench
we fall in like a drop of rain,
from where climbing up is way too hard
it let's us experience unimaginable pain.

Although the fall might seem 
blissful for some prior second,
but then you come into your senses
you understand how every minute leads to a painful end.

Love might be about star gazing at night or dancing in the rain
it might be about being eachothers incomplete part,
but it still casts those unbearable wounds
not literally on your body but to your wretched heart.

© 2022 @r[@nE


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Good morning,
Words like falling, do not seem correct,.. when one is speaking of love, as love seems to be uplifting.. full of desire and hope...
It is interesting that some words do not seem to work properly to truly express the thought.. But perhaps here falling actually means...going into..deeply feeling...etc. LOVE.. so then the word falling does seem to work..
Very interesting thoughts and so good that these thoughts brought about your poem... and, made the readers of your poem think and thinking is always good.
Enjoyed reading this.
Lisa, 7am in Spain

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

6 Days Ago

You are most welcome... I think it is always good to leave reviews..
and, to read poems..I ha.. read more
@r[@nE

6 Days Ago

I will definitely go through your works and make sure to review them as well. Thanks a lot for recom.. read more
Lisasview

6 Days Ago

Thank you so much, I have so many posted now..It will take you quite awhile... Did I recommended Inn.. read more


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A lovely poem. I haven’t thought of it this way. I am new
So I have no points and don’t know about the rating system.
I like what I like though and I like your poem.

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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You raise an interesting thought here. certainly the spirits rise when you are in love. The falling, I think comes with perhaps the overwhelming feeling of not being in control of our emotions. Love can hit us like a brick or as softly as the flutter of a butterfly 's wings. Quite a difference. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.

Chris

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

@r[@nE

6 Days Ago

Thankyou so much for your review. appreciate it:)
Chris Shaw

6 Days Ago

You are most welcome:)
Good morning,
Words like falling, do not seem correct,.. when one is speaking of love, as love seems to be uplifting.. full of desire and hope...
It is interesting that some words do not seem to work properly to truly express the thought.. But perhaps here falling actually means...going into..deeply feeling...etc. LOVE.. so then the word falling does seem to work..
Very interesting thoughts and so good that these thoughts brought about your poem... and, made the readers of your poem think and thinking is always good.
Enjoyed reading this.
Lisa, 7am in Spain

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

6 Days Ago

You are most welcome... I think it is always good to leave reviews..
and, to read poems..I ha.. read more
@r[@nE

6 Days Ago

I will definitely go through your works and make sure to review them as well. Thanks a lot for recom.. read more
Lisasview

6 Days Ago

Thank you so much, I have so many posted now..It will take you quite awhile... Did I recommended Inn.. read more
This is an amazing poem, you described love and the experience in different ways in which one doesn't really think about. I love it.

Posted 6 Days Ago


@r[@nE

6 Days Ago

Thankyou so much :)
This is a beautiful poem portraying different emotions we feel while we are in love. And it's really true that the incomplete stories are always painful. Have been there so totally relatable.I enjoyed reading this and thanks a lot for sharing.

Posted 1 Week Ago


@r[@nE

1 Week Ago

Thanks a lot for reading and giving such a nice review. Truly appreciate it :)
Oh so interesting! I never stopped to think about why love is always about falling and not rising. For example, falling in love, falling apart, falling off the deep end or something. Why can't we rise in love? I think falling has a negative meaning to it because when we say falling in love, its supoosed to be a good thing, but then we keep on falling and eventually we hit rock bottom.... if it was rising then we would keep on rising forever which is a positive thing. I enjoyed reading this, it was thought provoking. Thanks for sharing!!

Posted 1 Week Ago


@r[@nE

1 Week Ago

Thanks a lot for such a nice feedback. I truly appreciate your effort to read and review my work.
Aura

1 Week Ago

My pleasure :)
Like this poem! why not about rising? dwelling to the positivities?

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

@r[@nE

1 Week Ago

It's actually fun to go deep but then the term falling just casts different mark when thought deeply.. read more
Aerial

1 Week Ago

yeah right.

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